Humor feeds those parts of man
That hope sweet dreams come true
And woman feels she finally can
Do what she wants to do.
Anyone is happy when
Laughter lightens air.
Giggles entertain us then
And we no longer care.
This poem is a simple one.
It rhymes and sounds like verse.
I hope that now you know it’s done
It don’t make matters worse.
Posted for dVerse OpenLinkNight #187.
This is lovely Frank, especially ‘Anyone is happy when Laughter lightens air’ :o)
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Thank you!
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Oh blessed be laughter… I love this, it made me smile too.
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Thanks! I hoped this would be humorous.
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laughter is still our strongest defence
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Yes, laughter adds strength when we need it.
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for some reason I hear this spoken in a cowboy’s drawl…not even sure which cowboy but I hear him!
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It is written in common meter which may be typical of some cowboy ballads. My own accent is US mid-western, near Chicago.
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And I hear this in the liltingtrill of an 11 year old! Yes, laughter does lighten the air and it made me smile.
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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I specially love: Laughter lightens air. And a man who makes me laugh, makes me happy ~ Thanks for joining in Frank ~
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Thank you, Grace!
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Great piece and love the rhyming pattern.
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Thank you! The form is common meter. It is usually the first pattern that comes to my mind.
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Haha. Yes, thank you for the smiles and giggles. 🙂
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Thank you!
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very positive poem, Frank, I like it! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Your words breathe ease into the soul. Thanks for sharing, Frank 🙂
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
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This made me smile. I love poems about themselves.
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Yes, it is a poem about itself! Thanks!
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The matters are perfect for me, because the song ends with laughter. It is a rare sight, I like what it tries to teach.
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I like positive messages and laughter is positive. Thank you!
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Bang on, brother–for we need both levity & a little madness to keep our spirits afloat. This common meter has the feel of a limerick; smile.
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Both common meter and limericks seem simple to write and potentially lighthearted. I guess they could also be about more somber subjects. Thanks!
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This is wonderful, Frank. Laughter does lighten the air as well as hearts. Thanks for the smile!
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Thank you!
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This is very enjoyable to read…love the ‘sound’ of it and the lighthearted message, too 🙂
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Thank you!
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You made me smile late at night. well done
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Thanks!
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Oh you cheeky bugger! I like how you snuck up on us with the punchline! And you made me smile, so I’d say you left us all better off. 🙂
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Thank you! I was hoping the punch line at the end would not be too obvious until one actually read it.
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Particularly like the opening two lines
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Thanks, Steve!
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kaykuala
It comes light-hearted that one feels floating on air! Love it Frank!
Hank
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Thanks, Hank!
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Oh yes! Love the sounds of laughter…especially the giggles of children.
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Thanks, Bryan!
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Cool little rhyme scheme and good point.
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Thanks, Sean!
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