The brain feels crueler than the beating heart.
The gut is grosser resting further down.
Not being robots we are not that smart.
Our hearts don’t understand an AI frown.
The brain helps us when there’s a need to cope,
Anticipate how we should make some move.
Our hearts beat on beyond with rhythmic hope
Way past the need to optimize or prove.
The Moon and Mars are places we have sent
These little brains to tell us what they find.
The heart goes where no robot ever went.
We’re wise to kept our precious hearts behind.
Although we’d lose a game of chess to it,
We’ve sheltered hearts with love because of it.
Linked to dVerse Have a Heart! hosted by Lillian.
Linked to imaginary garden with real toads The Tuesday Platform.
Photo: “Heart Green Shelter” by the author.
My interest in the heart and brain connection comes from reading Rollin McCraty’s articles on the science of the heart.
Happy Valentine’s Day, Frank!
Especially like this line: “The heart goes where no robot ever went.” So so true 🙂
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Happy Valentine’s Day! I liked that line as well. I don’t know where it came from, but I made sure there was a rhyme word to match.
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I do love this.. very much the balance of sense and sensibility.. love the rhythm of this sonnet.. well done
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Thank you! There is a balance of sense and sensibility in it come to think of it.
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Ahh the old tale of the Head and the Heart…beautifully played out Frank
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The head and heart ultimately work together, but it is nice to contrast them. Thanks!
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Yours might Frank 😉
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This is so lovely, rings true of life. Heart and Head are like a marriage, which you cannot separate one from the other, if you do you are lost losing synch and unity, become scatter brain….lol
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We have to give each their due. Thanks, Hélène!
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Intellect versus emotion–hosting a symbiotic relationship, yet too often the heart trumps the brain–pushing from should/must do into wanna-do.
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From what I have read of Rollin McCraty, the heart dominates and sends more information than the brain does, but the brain is useful as well.
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Happy Valentine’s Day, Frank!
I do like the lines:
‘The brain helps us when there’s a need to cope,
Anticipate how we should make some move.
Our hearts beat on beyond with rhythmic hope
Way past the need to optimize or prove.’
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Happy Valentine’s Day! I am glad you liked those lines. I like how the heart goes “way past” the brain in some contexts. Thank you!
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Happy Valentine’s Day Frank, a wonderful write :o)
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Thank you! Happy Valentine’s Day!
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Thank you ☺
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A most wonderfully written sonnet 🙂 Happy Valentine’s Day, Frank 🙂
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Happy Valentine’s Day! I am glad you liked the sonnet.
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“Our hearts beat on beyond with rhythmic hope, Way past the need to optimize or prove”. Oh yeah! Been there, done that. Good words!
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Sometimes my heart has made stupid mistakes because it didn’t listen to the brain, but it is nice for the heart to be a independent. Thank you!
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Love the sonnet and this part is my favorite – irreplaceable I say:
The heart goes where no robot ever went.
We’re wise to kept our precious hearts behind.
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Those are my favorite lines in the poem as well especially the first one. Thanks!
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Art.. 60 percent smART
sAMe for heART
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I love your comments. Thank you!
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Thank you.. my
FriEnd.. reformed
Robot..
Me..;)
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interesting…and so true—Our hearts beat on beyond with rhythmic hope
Way past the need to optimize or prove.
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Love this sonnet, very brainy! I can’t figure out the subject of that photo for the life of me, but I really like it anyway. Cool post!
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Thanks, Marian! I almost didn’t put a photo on this piece. Your observation suggests this photo distracted attention from the poem. The reason for the photo was the green color which I think is the color of the heart chakra and the huge size of the leaf.
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Often I think photos are distracting from the writing, and I don’t often include them myself, but I was definitely wrapped up in your poem here.
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I really enjoy your metaphor – a modern twist on the classical conceit.
The heart goes where no robot ever went.
We’re wise to kept our precious hearts behind…. Wise words indeed.
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Thank you, Kerry! I liked those lines as well.
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great contrast of heart and mind – especially like “Our hearts beat on beyond with rhythmic hope” –
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Thanks, Laura! I liked the sound of “beat on beyond”.
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Love this in sonnet form. Especially:
“The gut is grosser resting further down.” 😉
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Thanks! I wanted to include the gut because some view it as a source of inspiration as in trusting one’s gut feelings and it is right up there with the brain and heart.
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Yes, sense and sensibility…We too often can keep the balance between heart and mind. My heart seems to always take the lead.
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I think the heart takes the lead based on Rollin McCraty’s work also. Thank you!
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Good points, well made.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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So true. Striking a balance with the heart and head is difficult. But neither can survive without the either too.
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They are both needed as you say. Thanks for the comment!
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Although we’d lose a game of chess to it,
We’ve sheltered hearts with love because of it.
One has to selfishly safeguard our precious little. Once given away it is subject to lots of challenges. Very true Frank!
Hank
http://imagery77.blogspot.my/2017/02/had-he-strength-to-overcome.html
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Thanks, Hank! The brain helps to shelter our hearts although our hearts are in control.
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I love the balance of this poem, even beyond the rhyme.
My favorite part:
“The heart goes where no robot ever went.
We’re wise to kept our precious hearts behind.”
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Thanks, Barry! I see rhyme as secondary to meter and meter secondary to meaning. I am glad the rhyme did not get in the way for you.
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