It’s maddening to hear someone
So wrong who thinks he’s right,
Who says the market’s going down,
Who gives my bullish hopes a frown,
Who paints bright day as night.
It’s true: I do not have a clue.
There might be danger there.
The herd I follow faithfully
Has got its mind made up for me.
Why fight it? I don’t care.
And when we can’t avoid the cliff
Stampeding to the fall,
I will rethink what he had said
At least before I’ve landed dead:
He’s wrong still after all.
Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar.
Photo: “Wings Go Up and Down” by the author.
I am hosting today and for some odd reason picked the theme of “irony”. Hopefully you will find what I wrote above understandable enough and yet ambiguous enough to be at least remotely ironical. Stop by and link up some of your own ironical poetry.
Love the irony!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Oh yes.. at least we have the joy in knowing we were right.
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It is hard to know what is going to happen, so one might as well enjoy whatever choices one made.
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I agree with Bjorn on this one!
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Yes, I agree. Thanks!
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Right for now anyway. A timely rhyme. Well done.
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It is right for now. Thanks, Bev!
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Love the rhyming verses and theme of thinking along with the herd ~ Guess we are clueless, just listening and doing what most people are doing ~ A challenge to write Frank ~
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I’m pretty clueless as well. I just hope I stop before the cliff gets too close. Thanks, Grace!
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Being “right” can be lethal, & can lead to the demise of fortune, friendship. matrimony, & mental stability. Now, as to the Market–that’s a plague infested swamp I do not venture into.
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I think you are right about that. Thanks, Glenn!
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We are amid the age of deconstruction in which words are interpreted oppositely their meanings. I think it’s so important to have an inner Guide for this reason (among many.)
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I agree. We need an inner Guide to make sense out of anything today, whether it is markets or anything else. Thanks!
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I love the irony too Frank. The close made me smile!
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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Thanks, Anna!
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interesting choice of the stock market to show irony but reading on it seems so true that we invest so much into something we have no control and watch as external factors buoy our feelings and torment our soul. I feel that giving up control is very ironic here.
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We don’t have much control over it and it seems herd driven up or down. But I suspect other decisions we make in life are similar. Thanks, Gina!
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The hooved motifs sprinkled throughout this poem are so effective!
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I was trying to spook the herd and get it moving. 🙂 Thanks!
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The market is an excellent topic for this, as stocks and whatnot remain too ambiguous for me to follow. I also enjoyed the rhythm of this.
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I am glad you liked the rhythm. I was trying to imitate Goldsmith but didn’t quite get his meter right.
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Never take the advise of the “expert.” because by that time…you’ve already missed it. Is true, jump when ever one thinks you are lividly insane. Good dissecting of the crookedest game in town!
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Thank you! I expect the experts will go over the cliffs as well.
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‘It’s maddening to hear someone
So wrong who thinks he’s right,
Who says the market’s going down,
Who gives my bullish hopes a frown,
Who paints bright day as night.’
– the ironies 🙂
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Yes, there they are. Thank you!
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The juxtaposition of tangible descriptions – up and down, right and wrong – make for a compelling poem with thought-provoking verse. Well done!
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I am glad you found it thought-provoking. There is a lot of implied dualism in this poem that needs resolution. Thanks!
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Ha! Too (sadly) true.
We just keep saying the mantra “Be your own economy. Be your own economy.” 😉
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Although everything can come crashing down, that mantra sounds like good advice. There will still be smaller economic units than those larger markets. Thanks!
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the photo. your words. your voice. what an ensemble of irony!
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Thank you, Rosema! I am glad you liked them.
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you’re welcome, Frank!
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market is a bumpy place, lot of insight needed…
loved the last stanza, excellent for the prompt!
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Thank you, Sreeja! The more I think about irony and read the linked poems, the less confidence I have that I know what it is.
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…we are a herd of sheep…gambling on a chances. I like the rhythm to this, Frank.
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Thank you, Kathy! I try to get the rhythm right just in case the content makes no sense.
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‘So wrong who thinks he’s right,’…love this line & I like to believe that this is the time of the extreme rights so everything is going wrong….love the rhythm too….
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There is a sense that “right” is also “right-wing” politically. I am glad you liked the rhythm!
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It’ll be a movie one day…wrong and wronger!
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I hope to be still around to watch it. Wrong and wronger reminded me of a movie that I enjoyed but other, more mature, members of my family would have nothing to do with: “Dumb and Dumber”. I even liked “Dumb and Dumber To”.
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The inspiration for my idea.
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Frank you given us a timely piece — perhaps irony is a good fit four our modern circumstances. The line “Has got its mind made up for me” resonates well in this, it works well. Nicely done! ~peace, Jason
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I am glad you like it, Jason. I enjoyed the poem you linked as well. I wish I resolved mine as positively as you resolved yours. Thank you!
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Hello! I have nominated you for a blog award. You can read about it here: https://thepittstops.wordpress.com/2017/04/01/one-lovely-blog-award/
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Thank you! Your blog keeps reminding me that there are interesting places I have never seen and probably should.
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Irony .. my friEnd.. Frank.. A RaTheR
perFect proMpt for April Fool’s Day
i WiLL add.. wRitE on course..
and one i Hope
to get
back buy
oN aLthough
Dollars and Cents
are well into the Past
oF FeeL and Sense
to Me.. my friEnd..
thE Drummer iS mY
heART tHe SinGeR is mY
SpiRit and The DaNceR iS mY
soUL HoW iRonic iT iS hoW aLL
oF thAT iS rePlaced bY Cultural Clothes..
but nah.. mY soUL pLays Naked And Soars beYond the CliFF..
And as ‘they’ say..
tHeRe iS A SonG
foR thAT
too..
LoVeR oF thE LiGht..:)
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Being beyond the cliff is the best place to be. Those racing toward it won’t see it before it is too late. Best wishes!
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Thanks my.. friEnd..
Much.. with same to
You.. wiTh more sMiLes..:)
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Oh the irony of group think. It reminds me of what my mother used to say, “If everyone else jumped off a cliff, would you?” And the blind shall lead the blind. 😟
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My mother used to tell me the same things. We are parts of groups, even those who don’t go over the cliffs should they ever appear. Thanks, Lillian!
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