What’s neither dry nor frozen hard
Makes circles red with bliss
And green takes form to guide and guard
Metamorphosis.
Linked to Jilly’s 28 Days of Unreason Day 18 regarding Jim Harrison’s quote preferring to move water than ice.
Linked also to Jilly’s August Challenge. Consider this the first 4 lines of a 8 line common meter poem.
Photo: “Indoor Plant” by the author linked to Floral Friday Fotos.
Good work Frank 🙂
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Thanks, Ben!
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Clever! Well done Frank.
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Thanks, Peter!
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It came back to water.. Hmm.. It’s keen observation.. Green taking form and then guiding and guarding the flow.. A beautiful painting..
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Without flowing water none of that would happen. Perhaps without a lot of other things as well. Thank you!
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Ah! I look forward to the challenge of completing this one.
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Great! I am thinking of how to continue your bop challenge as well.
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I’m gonna see if I can come up with something for this one.
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That would be great, Lynn! Thank you!
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Well done, Frank.
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Thank you, Eugenia!
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Beautiful capture! I dabble some in poetry, but to answer to a particular one would be too challenging for me! A lovely one:) Thanks for visiting my blog!
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Thank you! There are other poetry prompts you might be interested in. I’ve listed some on my sidebar. I am glad you liked the photo!
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Simple and powerful. I really like this very much.
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Thank you, Mary! I am glad you liked it!
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it´s a beautiful flower. 🙂
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Thank you!
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I’ve started working on the challenge of this, Frank, but my brain is turning into fried rice 🙂 I love the CM form and will return tomorrow.
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No problem, Jilly! I am still thinking of yours as well.
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A lovely poem, Frank. I like the photograph too.
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Thanks, Robbie. The flower is on my patio.
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https://jillys2016.wordpress.com/2017/08/07/what-flowing-water-makes-possible/
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Thanks, Jilly! That was a nice second half!
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My pleasure! I took your voice into account.
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Changes all aRound
Nature Dry to FroZen
Soft Live
Hardy
Survive
Green
Lights
iN Sun
shines within..:)
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I like how the “Green
Lights
iN Sun
shines within” Thanks, Fred!
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A Pleasure
To
Grow
Poetry
HeAr
With
SMiLes..:)
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HalF time less
WHole time
more
Be
less
MoRE NoW..
Before i forget
time Hi Frank now..;)
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Hi, Fred! Thank you for the comment. I will be looking at your recent post later this afternoon.
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Hehe no
Hurry
The
Bottom
Of it is
Out
Of
Control
For now..;)
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yay! a riddle. Let me figure this out first…. 🙂
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It does read like a riddle now that you mention it. I don’t think I know the answer to it. Thanks, Imelda!
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🙂 Your piece was very clever, actually. 🙂
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Hey, Frank! This was a fun poem to write. You started it well. Hope I didn’t crash it!
https://lifeinportofino.wordpress.com/2017/08/16/what-swimming-together-can-do/
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Thanks for adding the second half, Charley! You didn’t crash it!
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Thank you, Frank!
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Your poem is wonderful, Frank. I has an Emily Dickinson flavor..Brief and right on.
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you, Judy!
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