Serving underneath my feet
Holding on along the side
Often magically complete:
Every fairy tale’s a treat,
Sweet or terrified.
Linked to dVerse Poetics. Kim of Writing in North Norfolk is hosting with the theme “shoes”. This poem uses the “acrostic” form which I will feature this Thursday on dVerse. I am practicing using it.
Photo: “Blue Sky With People Wearing Shoes” by the author linked to Frank Jansen’s Tuesday Photo Challenge with the theme “blue”. I took the photo at the Chicago Botanic Garden.
This can be interpreted in some odorous ways.
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Yes, depending on the shoes! Thank you!
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I see you’re getting ready for Thursday’s MTB, Frank! Breaking your shoes in!
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My second acrostic poem ever. It is like breaking my shoes in. Thanks, Kim!
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🙂
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The photo is perfectly composed Frank, as is the acrostic. Well done indeed!
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Thanks, Peter! The people in the photo are on the bottom, like one’s shoes.
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Most people make the mistake of wanting to centre everything in photos. Your composition really shows the subject off well.
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Shoes and fairly tails….glass shoes, and all.
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We are protected by our fairy tales (or stories in general) we tell ourselves much like the shoes we wear to protect our feet.
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Love this, Frank. Your title is spectacular.
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Thanks, De! I liked putting shoes and fairy tales together.
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A very clever poem…and the photo is beautiful..
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Thank you!
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Acrostics here we come, or so it seems–should be a hoot. Nice gentle rocking of the prompt, and great use of your own image.
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I usually avoid acrostics. This is only my second one. They are not as easy as I thought they would be. Thanks, Glenn!
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I’m lovin’ the acrostic format. Can’t wait to try it!
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I’ve only tried two of these so far. I keep the words short, but I suspect some people might find longer words even easier. Thanks, Bev!
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What a super acrostic poem. I love the title of this and the photo…like you said, the people are on the bottom. Well done!
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I didn’t realize that until I read Peter’s comment earlier. When I took the photo I was more interested in the clouds, but the anonymous, tiny people give the clouds perspective. Thanks, Toni!
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🙂
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Oh I love to walk on fairytales- reminds me of the song by Paul Simon – diamonds on the soles of her shoes
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Good example with Paul Simon’s song! It occurred to me while writing this that shoes protect us, but so do the stories we have in our minds about who we are. Some fairy tales even contain metaphorical truths. Thanks, Björn!
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ah yes! love this! the closing line!
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I am glad you liked that last line with both sweet and terrified stories protecting us. Thank you, Rosema!
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you are welcome, Frank!
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I love fairy tales too, Frank. This is a really cute poem.
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Thanks, Robbie! Fairy tales allow us to get to the heart of the matter faster, and they are shorter–usually. I am glad you liked the poem.
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There are some locations that look like fairytales to walk … some places of grand history too – like Hadrian’s Wall path… that is something I would love to do one day!
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The Chicago Botanic Garden is like walking in a fairy tale, but old historic structures keep the mind active trying to imagine what happened there. Thanks, Margaret!
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walking on air in this poem Frank
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Thanks, Laura! That is perhaps what a good fairy tale should do.
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Amen to that, buddy. {Hearts} for this.
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Thank you!
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This is a delight. I love acrostics. Wrote an alphabetical one quite a few years back. Now that is a challenge. Perhaps I will repost it for MTB since it was before most people were hanging around who are here now.
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I hope you post it! I have been thinking of writing an alphabestiary now that I realize the possibilities after reading the poems linked to this prompt. Thanks, Victoria!
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Hmm.. speaking of shoes i caught
a quick YouTube Home Algorithm
produced blurb on Human Fetishes
to find out that sex organs and
feet are closely
associated
in the
brain but
the part they
left out are the
oxytocin receptors
that are associated
as Athletes adjust
themselves
in the
performance
anxiety of an
actual sport for
warm and cozy
oxytocin mammal
comfort as yes the feet
also have these same oxytocin
receptors that even can/will bring
us love when we touch the Mother who
is eARTh in both flesh and sands as ‘they’ say all is connected..;)
And no…
i don’t care for ‘baseball’..
it’s boring to me in personal preference..;)
But it’s true in mirror
neuron way many
armchair
ex-athletes
find motor activity
cerebellum stimulation
on mall benches while
i whizz by in realtime Dance NoW my FriEnd..
engaging all senses and feelings and intellect
from head to toe beyond….
And a tire change
of 125 bucks shoes
every three months
like a human oil change that pays life so much more as real..:)
Hmm.. Frank..
i thiNk this NoW
is a ‘FredbunHaibunFredkuHaikuwithoutfredfukungfu’ but i don’t care to ‘know’..;)
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Nice “FredbunHaibunFredkuHaikuwithoutfredfukungfu”! I didn’t know the association with sex organs and feet, but it does give dancing a new justification with its touching the Earth. A tire change every three months to keep up the dancing may be worth it. Thanks, Fred!
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SMiLes.. just got back
From working out..
NoW body rests
With Writing..:)
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Yes Shoes are magical too. Loved your acrostic poetry, even I like this style of poetry; it essays everything though being crisp.
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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Thank you! I have only written a few acrostic poems, but I am thinking of writing more.
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With that poem, you’re a shoe-in for the win! Great entry!!
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Thank you, Frank!
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For some reason I cannot view your photo, but I LOVE your poem 🙂 Very clever 🙂
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I am glad you liked the poem and I see you can now see the photo. Thank you, Judith!
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Photo now come into view. Lovely 🙂
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I’m glad you can see it. I have the original on my phone. What I put on WordPress I shrink to about 15% before I upload it to make sure the download for readers is rapid and not to use up disk space there.
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I love how the green and blue sky meet and the people walking about provide a sense of scale.
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I was aiming for those paintings of nature where the people in the scene are very tiny to provide scale as you mentioned. Thank you, Khürt!
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Every walk in such weather has to be a fairy tale. Lovely photo.
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Yes, I think it is–just being able to. Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Awesome poem.
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Thank you, Amanda!
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