What will help me levitate
Above my shallow, mundane state,
Paint my dreams in shocking true
From patient red to brilliant blue?
Where’s the shift that turns the night
Into the mysteries of light
And lets the words that stray today
Be only those you’d have me say?
Text: Linked to dVerse Poetics. Bjorn is hosting with the theme of questions.
Photos: “The Shoin House at the Chicago Botanic Garden”, above, and “Morning Observations”, below, by the author.
There are no answers to your questions except more questions… love that.
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The answers are ongoing, I imagine. I would probably be disappointed if there were any definite answers. It would take away too much of the mystery of not knowing completely. Thanks, Bjorn!
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“Paint my dreams in shocking true” is brilliant!!
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Thank you! That was the line I felt I needed to justify saying the poem was finished.
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Your image in the lower right would look lovely on my photography site, brother. So cool that you rocked the prompt, yet worked in a rhyme scheme, and a strong poem emerged.
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Thank you, Glenn! I took that photo with your photography site in mind. I will put it there later this afternoon. It also helps add contrast for a collage. I am glad you liked the poem!
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Frank that just turned me into a convert. I have never been a big fan of poetry (sorry), but I loved that. You’re good!
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I’m glad you enjoyed the poem! I’m not sure if I like poetry and stories more or photographs. I guess I will always be shooting my mouth as well as photographs so I will have to have both.
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It is a great combination! 🙂
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Good work Frank,
Actually you levitate, because yours atoms never touch each other.
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Thank you, Ben! Although the levitation is metaphorical, there is some reality in the experience. I am glad you enjoyed this!
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I too use to wonder about the first question. The title is wonderful and tells me that I need to see the answer with new eyes or ask the right question.
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Forming the question may be the most difficult. Inside the question lies the answer. Thank you, Olga!
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You are absolutely right. The question drives the answer.
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juniper berries. Gin…might give the appearance of levitation….
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Those things might work. “Levitation” may not be the right word but it does suggest some ways to answer the question. Thank you, Alison!
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One of your best, Frank! It certainly invites multiple contemplative reads.
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Thank you! I am glad you is worth reading more than once.
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The answer is “You”. With that in mind, one sees the depth of your words.
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The answer is You with a capital “Y”. Thank you for noticing it.
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“Where’s the shift that turns the night
Into the mysteries of light”
This is so wonderfully anti-cliche! You put the mystery in the light, and that’s exactly where it belongs, isn’t it? Why is it that so many fear the light anyway?
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Perhaps sometimes we take the light for granted and then think we have to struggle against it? I don’t know. Good question about fearing the light. Thank you!
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The answers to these questions are hidden in the depths of the sky (we spoke of this)…. or an even greater depth…in your soul. Great post.
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Thank you, Vivian! Greater depth in the right direction.
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This is great.
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Thank you, Shawna!
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Shocking true? Frank! That is fabulous!
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It comes from thinking “shocking blue” wasn’t shocking enough. Thank you, Jilly!
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I usually use “sculpt” for a well-written set of words. This, I believe, needs something better… Scrimshaw, perhaps. It really is top notch.
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Thank you, Charley! It is amazing the questions that pop into one’s mind when focuses on asking them.
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Yes, it is! And enlightening at times.
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These two lines, just reached in and grabbed me. Absolutely, wish I’d written those lines.
Paint my dreams in shocking true
From patient red to brilliant blue?
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I’m glad you liked them so much. I wasn’t sure that “shocking true” would seem right to readers, but based on the comments it looks like it did. Thank you!
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A lovely sentiment – I particularly liked the final couplet – as you shifted who you were addressing with the poem. Worth another read or two.
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Yes, there was a shift in those last two lines. I’ve seen that technique used to keep the reader alert. I’m not sure why I used it here. Thank you, Peter!
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A beautiful question. Your poetry is the answer Frank.
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I am glad you think so, Elizabeth! Thank you!
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That’s some brilliant poetry! Your questions intrigued me. I am still looking for answers for these:
Where’s the shift that turns the night
Into the mysteries of light
And lets the words that stray today
Be only those you’d have me say?
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The continual searching for an answer may be what is desirable–a continual journey not a destination finally reached with answers one can take literally. Thank you!
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Where’s the shift that turns the night
Into the mysteries of light
Great words that will prompt lots of questions in the mind, Frank!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank! The questions keep going through mine.
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The answer is blowing in the wind, I’d say. (K)
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Yes, and the wind will keep blowing because we will always need to hear it. Thank you!
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We do.
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Dreams that aren’t painted are ambiguous. Very Good! But I have to say, I have never thought of red as patient. But mine aren’t the only words.
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I think of red as hot tempered and associated with anger, but the coolest stars are the red ones and the hottest are the blue ones. I was trying to shift red to something softer. Regardless all those stars are very hot. Thanks, Mary!
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Brilliant poem and title Frank 🙂
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Thanks, Janice! I was hoping the title would make the questions seem more important.
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Love love LOVE your title. And (always, ever) your mastery of rhythm and rhyme.
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I’m glad you liked the title. There aren’t really any answers to these questions which is probably a good thing. Thank you, De!
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Much food for thought. Who’s that “you”? Awesome form and flow, as always.
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That “you” is mysterious. It could be viewed as a “You” or as that aspect of us we personally relate to and choose to follow. Like a lover, we do not want to disappoint him or her.
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That’s great poetics, Frank, which sparks different meanings to different readers. Thanks for your explanation.
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I really like the first verse for its flow and feel, drawing me in. The second one raises the bar of your poetry to a subliminal level. The best I have read of yours.
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Thank you, Kathy! I am glad you enjoyed this. The second stanza does try to take the reader beyond the first one, from an individualistic desire to a communal one.
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I would like to recite it loud….loved the questions …. these questions maybe there inside many… unaccounted….
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I think we all have these kinds of questions. Thank you, Sreeja!
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Ponderous queries for sure, Frank. Don’t look now, but your brilliance is showing!
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Thank you, Walter! I am glad you enjoyed them.
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Succinctly put, Frank. Questions we all ask ourselves form time to time, but so well put. You’re right, they don’t tolerate any old answer!
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Yes, I think we all these questions. I am glad you enjoyed this, Bev!
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Nice. Exept from the last line. I don’t get it. – And the answer is, of course, Jesus. The Son.
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You’re right. Others may see the name differently or even as the “God within” or as a lover. There are many paths and many places to rest on each path. However, we aren’t completely individuals. These paths blend us together as we tell the stories of our journeys to each other. Thank you, Vaccinius!
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That’s very Shakespeare-ish… Nice vintage tone 🙂
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Thank you, Ashwini!
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Great questions. The form works so well here, as usual!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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I don’t read rhyming poetry often, but when I do, I’ll read yours! Stay witty, my friend!
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Thank you, Frank! I think it is the sense of the poem that is primary. The rhyme and meter hopefully enhances it.
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Good questions to ponder on.
I also like your photos. They give a sense of peace.
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Thank you, Imelda! I am glad they provided a sense of peace.
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Mundane States
Surely.. First World
Problems of Mechanical
Stone Cognition come to Roost
Are also Tribal Leaning Religions
that kill art
in boys
to protect
a tribe overcoming
A Love Aversion to
kill other Humans
no matter which
team goes
go team
go..
Emotional Numbness and
or Emotional Pain greatest
Social Animal Tests of Hairless
Leaning Apes for the joy of painting
life with colors other than stone that
bashes in the Children’s Head in Psalms
oF onWard Religious Soldiers.. possessing
more than right hands and all that jazz
of rape
and
pillAge
too.. for bred
and bread and water
in desert lands of scarcity
true.. where art fAils where opposite
sex hands don’t hold where clothes cover
the skin of God whole in paRT of HumaN
eYes oF LiGht.. Houston.. we have a problem
far far far
from
Floods
BRinGinG
Love togetHeR
aGaiN in Colors of
Loving Art that say dance sing brush paint
One Large Leap oF MasterPiece Painting isreal..:)
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Yes, “Loving Art that say dance sing brush paint”. Thanks, Fred!
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LATE to the reading 😦 Didn’t even have time from our Cape Cod respite to do Thursdays’ OLN….but enjoying your take on this wonderful prompt. Ah….that we all could find a way to “levitate.” I’d especially like to do that these days….somehow float above the fray.. 🙂
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Even metaphorically levitating every now and then would make me happy. Thanks, Lillian!
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