Dreams I can’t remember–
I wonder–were they nice?
When I wake I understand
They enhance like spice.
Who was busy through the night?
I can not recall.
Who then turned the morning on?
Who put color in the dawn?
That one did it all.
Text: Linked to dVerse Quadrille Monday. Mish hosts today with the prompt word “spice”.
Photo: “Water Garden” by the author taken at the Chicago Botanic Garden.
I cannot remember my dreams either… not even those that wake me up before dawn… but there has to be someone.
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Even if in some way it is ourselves talking to ourselves or to each other perhaps collectively or communally there is some kind of agent since the reality is neither determined nor random (at least as far as I can see). What occurred to me is that not being individually aware of the dreams does not mean they have no impact on us. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Interesting question posed here Frank. There is a group of folk out there who lucid dream…become present within the dreams and they suggest anyone can learn how.
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I have had lucid dreams, but I don’t know how to control the process of waking up while I am dreaming. I suspect most of my dreams are forgotten happening earlier in the evening rather than toward morning when I can remember the dreams more easily and know that I was dreaming. I think those earlier dreams are valuable as well.
But the most valuable part of dreaming, for me, occurs when I wake up in the morning and understand something out of nowhere better than I had in the past or I have a better way of saying something than before. I don’t know where that comes from. It does not come from my own brain-heart-body, or my own individuality–at least I don’t think so. That was a nice video, Paul. Thanks for sharing it. Now I am going to have to try to perfect the techniques of lucid dreaming.
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This is beautiful in its rhyme, rhythm, simplicity, and a great take on the prompt. I really enjoyed it; thanks so much for sharing! ❤
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Thank you, Crystal! I try to make a poem sound nice and have something to say–the simpler the better since I don’t like being confused any more than the next reader.
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Mad love for the closing, Frank.
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I am glad you enjoyed the ending, Marley! Thank you!
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Lovely and intriguing questions float through your dreams and your words, Frank.
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Thank you, Jilly! Eventually the questions may morph into tentative answers.
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I enjoy the flow of this, dreaming to waking. I also wonder who turns the morning on.
Good one.
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For me the most intuitive time of the dream is right after I wake up, when I forget the dream, but understand something I didn’t realize before. Thank you, Vivian!
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Magic.
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A nice way to use the word–and to start out your morning, if only just the essence remains.
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I think “essence”, as you mention, is the right way of stating what remains of the dreams forgotten through the night but present at dawn. Thank you!
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I can relate to this poem. You wake up knowing you dreamt; never certain what it was you dreamt. A great write with the proper blend of question and bemusement.
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That is usually my case when I wake up in the morning. Most of the dreams I’ve forgotten, but I don’t think they are lost. I have had lucid dreams on occasion, but when I try to make sense out of them in the morning, they don’t make sense. Maybe I should practice the technique more. Thanks, Charley!
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Turning the morning on… like that!
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Almost like a light bulb in the morning–that’s one time when intuition seems to work best for me. Thank you!
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A pleasant meditation on the role of dreams. I enjoyed the fluidity of your rhythm and rhymes!
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Thank you, Frank! Dreams are a mystery for me. I don’t think we lose any of these dreams upon waking although we have often lost awareness of them.
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My best dreams of all are (or I should say were) flying dreams, in which I’d levitate and sail over the land below to my next stopping point. They were wonderful, but I don’t have them any more. I wonder why. Loved your poem, loved the last line!
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I remember a few flying dreams but they are not common for me, at least among those I remember. The one I remember was lucid. I knew I was dreaming and could go where I wanted to go. I wanted to see the different sides of the building below. I’m glad you liked the poem, Bev!
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Just excellent.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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I normally only know my day-dreams, but active dreaming in hypnotical trance is also a great and inspiring experience and adventure bringing in contact with the labyrinth of the inner worlds. Have a nice day and/or dream!
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Sometimes I don’t know even when I’m daydreaming and then when I start focusing on something I forget what I was previously thinking about. Thank you!
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Dreams are a big part of my sleep and I am very active during them. But controlling them?…seems impossible.
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If they are lucid I hear there is some control, but not what those dreams are. I don’t know where mine come from. Thanks, Kathy!
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Who then turned the morning on?
Who put color in the dawn?
That one did it all.
Providence’s wonderful greatness is very apparent!
Hank
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Yes, it is! Thank you, Hank!
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Remarkable indeed, we can’t begin to understand how our minds work and meanwhile someone is “putting color in the dawn.” Very nice, Frank!
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Usually we don’t personify that assuming there is no agent involved, but I wonder if that is a modern mythology or not. Thank you!
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So much going on while we sleep. I seldom dream….or I often forget…and when I do remember, I usually wish I hadn’t. Nice poem Frank.
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I am beginning to think it doesn’t matter if we remember the dreams or not. They are remarkable regardless. Thank you, Mary!
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I get that feeling too…just the essence of a dream, but not its contents. The idea of the scent of spice in the air seems right. (K)
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Yes, we don’t have to know the dream with much detail for the dream to have done its job. Thank you!
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I really liked this, Frank. Simple, but still speaks to the complexity of dreams. I can remember a dream I had as a child, but it was mixed with the sound of a table saw my father was making and our cocker spaniel who came home with him from Australia and WWII. But most dreams I have forgotten. But some haunt still. Lovely poem, Frank.
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I am aware of very few of my dreams. It is interesting that yours included sound. I don’t know if I’ve ever heard anything, but I will pay attention to that if I remember any dream in the future. Thanks, Jane!
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I was surrounded with sound, Frank. everyone in my family were musicians….my father a French Horn Player. LOL! You couldn’t escape it. Mahler, too.
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hmmmm….for me, I can’t remember the dreams that I wish I could…..and I do remember the dreams I wish I didn’t…if that makes sense. 😦
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I suspect we don’t have to remember dreams for them to be beneficial for us, but I don’t know. There are negative dreams and even thoughts I wish I didn’t have, but they sometimes come back to awareness–so I think I experience something similar to what you describe. Thanks, Lillian!
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I often forget my dreams upon waking.
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Me, too. But what I am aware of upon waking seems surprising. However, it is not the content of the dream itself to my knowledge but I usually can’t remember much of it. Thanks, Annell!
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This took me away to https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IxY2g4mR8Xk
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Nice poem with repeating lines: “I wake to sleep and take my waking slow”. Thanks, Jane!
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Gorgeous picture, Frank. I’m thinking you had a better camera than my iPhone!
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I have a Samsung camera probably similar to what your iPhone can do. I think these phones are good for general photography and they fit easily in a pocket, but those with better cameras can get more interesting pictures of closeups and night scenes–and many things I haven’t thought of taking a picture of. Thanks, Jacqui!
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Wonderful in imagery and interesting questions. I especially like the audio version you included.
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Thank you, Mish! When I get time I like to add an audio to see if the poem sounds good to me.
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I knew that was Chicago! Dreams are strange and, indeed, they can set the tone for the entire day. Frank, you are such a good team member, or it least it seems like that–taking time to read everyone. Thank you.
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Thank you, Victoria! I get ideas from all these poems. It is a win-win situation. That is a scene at the Chicago Botanic Garden. The garden is on multiple islands. I live close enough to bicycle there and the forest preserve is adjacent. The water is an interesting background to the garden.
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I love the outdoor gardens/sculptures and the many art venues in Chicago. I used it as a setting for my second novel.
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This is wonderful in its rhyme, cadence, effortlessness, and an awesome interpretation of the provoke. I truly delighted in it; thanks such a great amount for sharing!
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
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Manufactured
Light oF thOughts
UniVerse SepaRate
wHole
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one..:)
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Someone and it could be a whole in one. Thanks, Fred!
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Hehe..
i find
Golf
Boring..;)
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I have played miniature golf a few times with relatives. Other than that I have no understanding about the game.
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Me too a few times..
Miniature Golf
A Novelty..:)
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I think this is my absolute favourite so far, Frank. I really love this poem.
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I am glad you enjoyed this one, Robbie! Thank you!
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