Winter wears a gloomy sky.
Yesterday came snow.
Today as well we’ll get some, too.
Tomorrow? I don’t know,
But if it dumps a load on us
I will wonder when
We’ll get to feel warm spring love leap
That brings back joy again.
Text: Linked to dVerse Quadrille where Grace is hosting using “leap” as the prompt word.
Photos: “Sun Through Overcast Sky”, above, and “Lake Michigan and Overcast Sky”, below, by the author and linked to K’lee and Dale’s Cosmic Photo Challenge with theme “Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow”.
I remember being a part of group in Minnesota who strove to believe that joy wasn’t conditional. It stretched them a bit around February. By April it was all comfort food. “warm spring love leap” makes a good winter mantra… or a poster over the bed.
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Winter’s can be hard. The some of the hard ones of my past now frame some of my best memories. That phrase could be heard as a mantra now that you mention it. Thank you, Charley!
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We are having a frigid polar winter here Frank so I am really looking forward to a warm joyful spring ~ Thanks for joining in ~
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It is cold here as well, but I am getting used to it. There is nothing like a sunny day. Thank you, Grace!
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There’s such hope in the ‘warm spring love leap’, Frank. Happy New Year!
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There is hope there. Thank you, Kim!
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I would love to have some decent winter… my skis and skates are waiting…
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I haven’t seen the warm snow that sticks to the trees that I look for each winter, but it might come later. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Oh I wouldn’t mind a bit of spring as well. Especially if winter is as grey as it is at the moment
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A grey winter makes one forget the spring will come so it can surprise us. Thanks you, Trådløs!
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Is this about weather? or relationships? or just life?
I think it could be about all those things.
I am a bit envious of your snow. We are sinking deeper into mud every day. Not quite as picturesque.
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I remember the mud when living in a rural area. It can be annoying. The poem could be about many things, but at least it is about the weather. Thank you, Sarah!
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The word ‘love’ makes your reader look twice; well done! I especially admire the framing of your photo. Look forward to the the images of 2018 from your perspective.
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I am glad you like the images. The phrase with love I intended to contrast with the flow of the rest of the poem, partly because I couldn’t find the words to make it flow better and partly because I wanted that part to make the reader pause. Thanks, Jilly!
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I love the way the sound of the words “warm spring love leap” build upon each other and leap before landing softly on that final line.
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They do sort of leap. I didn’t realize that, but I think it does describe the sound effect. Thank you!
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Good pen Frank. Metaphorical or for real it makes one think. There is joy to be found in the snow though, right?
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I enjoy the snow. It can be very beautiful. I am glad you liked this, Paul!
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Excellent write Frank. I like the hope in this. The looking forward to better things.
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Thank you, Toni! I try to write the poems as positive as I can.
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Smiling at this–the rhythm flows and I think would be appealing to younger folk, as well. This is the way to introduce them to the joy of poetry.
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I aim for short poems that sound like a song. It is the closest I can get to singing. Thank you, Victoria!
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january and february are the dark months, and then the hope of green will return… a lovely write.
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Thank you, Kelly! We need some darkness to appreciate the light.
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This flows very easily. Nothing warm around here lately.
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It has been very cold here as well. My phone didn’t even want to take the pictures. It turned off after only three of them. Thanks, Dan!
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Yikes – yeah, batteries don’t last long in the cold.
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“We’ll get to feel warm spring love leap”
Love the way this line made me slow down to enunciate each word, taking in the hopefulness and beauty of it all.
I’m ready for Spring.
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At one point I was trying to fix that flow and then I thought it might be good to emphasize those words. Thank you, Mish!
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Love the sound of “warm spring love leap”.
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I am glad you liked that phrase. Thank you, Janice!
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“warm spring love leap” – absolutely! My first winter back in NY.
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Winter makes one look for spring. May your winter in NY be wonderful, Sara!
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Thank you, Frank. 😃
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We seem to be having a solid week in the deep freeze here. I can relate. Nicely done, Frank.
Pat
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It has been cold here as well, but I am getting used to it. There is nothing like central heating although I do remember a time with a wood stove. Thank you, Pat!
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I think these days the wood stove and fireplace are mostly for ambiance. Bust it is good to have both☺. Have a great day Frank.
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Excellence, as always, Frank. Thank you and Happy New Year!
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Thank you, K’lee! Happy New Year!
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Happy new year!
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Thank you! Happy new year!
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Happy New Year, Frank. This poems certainly says it all about cold, snowy weather.
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Thank you, Robbie! I know your weather is somewhat warmer. Happy New Year!
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Nice and warm today in Mexico. Can’t help saying……. I enjoyed your poem, Frank,
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I remember living in Cuernavaca many decades ago for about nine months. The weather there was almost a uniform 70 degrees F year round. Thank you, Judy!
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We see snow so seldom where I am that I wonder at your surviving your severe winters in the north. I’d love leap at a warmer Spring too!
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With central heating, the survival is easy, but overcast days do affect peoples’ moods regardless. Thank you, Petru!
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I was wearing shorts on New Year’s Day: How I wish to trade our warm spring love for a bit of your snow. Anyway, happy 2018, Frank! 🙂
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I’ve spent some winters in the southern United States where I could do that as well although most of them have been in the north. Changing seasons have their benefits. Happy new year, Colin!
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Cheers and thanks! I do wish to see changes though — what we have here are only typhoons and monsoons. *sigh
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I struggle with winter – but also with the darkness of certain moods – so this makes complete sense to me.
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Overcast days do affect moods. As does spring. Thank you!
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Everyone in the northern hemisphere is feeling winter… alast, we have months to go! You captured the winter blues.
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The overcast days are a somber blue although today is very bright, but cold. Thank you!
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Your poem flows beautifully and I hope you get those warm snows you can enjoy – happy New Year Frank! :o)
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They may still happen. Happy new year, Xenia!
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Thank you Frank! ☺🙋♀️
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I can’t wait for Spring! I hope you find some joy in the winter!
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I would to see Spring soon as well. Thank you, Mary!
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This is a universal theme and the photo could be many places this time of year. I like that love is just around the corner.
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Yes, love is just around the corner. Thank you, Kathy!
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Love your cool photo! Gloomy days can get one down!
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Yes, they can. Thank you!
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SMiLes mY FriEnd Frank..
A Lament For Spring a Rather
Welcome Break for a Fall and
Spring and Summer that seemingly
never ends for two year return to Winter Cold..
SMiLes.. TRuE
MaGiC comes
from seeing
Green NoW
Grass of Leaves
wHole wHere Brown
Leaves Reign now more
Imagination of Green Lawns
More Soul Green offsets Brown Grass more..
heHe.. other than that Cold inspires me to write even more.. hehe..;)
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If cold inspires writing it can’t be all that bad. Thanks, Fred!
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Hehe.. i
Find all
As Muse..
All
Is
A
DancE And
SonG A PoEtrY
PrompT
All
That is..:)
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Your poem has a lovely flow to it! Happy New Year.
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I am glad you like the flow. Thank you!
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I loved the sounds of this, it was almost dutifully playful. XX
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Thank you, Alison!
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This is amazingg! ^_^
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Thank you, Shruti!
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