Swinging from the family tree
Learning that the mystery
Isn’t what we have to know
But the joy when we let go.
Text: Linked to dVerse Poetics where Lillian is hosting with the theme of spring. Of the photos she provided for inspiration, I was thinking of the one with the two children swinging from a tree. The form of this poem is a tanaga. I will feature it on Thursday.
Photos: “Bird in Tree”, above, and the swing Lillian features, middle, and “Somewhere in Colorado Springs”, below.
Love this Frank. Ah yes….pumping the swing way up high and right at the peak of the arc, letting go and flying through the air! 🙂 I remember those moments. Can you also post (cut and paste in) the photo of the swinging from the prompt so folks can see it?
Not familiar (or at least I don’t remember it) with this form. Will have to google it. But I do always love the shorter forms. 🙂
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I added the image of the swing. The form is like common meter, but with only seven syllables per line. The rhyme pattern varies. Thank you, Lillian!
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Indeed! The knowing trickles in the more we let go. Beautiful!
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Thank you, Pragalbha!
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You are very welcome.
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I so remember that letting go… and landing was fun until it hurt.
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One could get hurt jumping out of those swings. Thank you, Bjorn!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked this!
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mmm I like the idea of a new form, will have to check that out. It did feel like being on a swing, that exhilarating moment of letting go.
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The form does have a rocking sort of meter. Thank you, Alison!
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Oh, the letting go – one of the best pleasures of childhood. Now I couldn’t even get up there 😉
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I suspect it wouldn’t be as much fun today either. Thank you, Kim!
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So beautiful. This makes me think of Emily D.
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I am glad it sounded like Emily Dickinson to you. Thank you, Shawna!
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History
Herstory
Ourstory
Isstory
NoW
aS
DNA
STanDS
TaLLDancESinGS..
Hello Frank.. Happy SPRinG STories..:)
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Happy Spring Stories, Fred! Thank you!
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Stories
Are
Springing
Continually
Green..:)
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Letting go is part of the excitement ~ Enjoyed the form and photo Frank ~
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Thank you, Grace!
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Letting go sometimes brought pain, but I love the perspective you have in this.
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Thank you, Mary!
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I really like this form, Frank. Beauty in the simplicity. So, the rhyme scheme is AABB?
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The rhyme scheme varies. Often it is a mono-rhyme, that is all four lines have the same rhyme sound. One could have multiple stanzas of four lines each with a separate rhyme on each line matching a rhyme word in the next stanza. The main thing is the seven syllables per line and the four lines per stanza although I am no expert on this. It is a lot like common meter in English as I hear it and it is part of the oral tradition of the Tagalog language.
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You really don’t feel the thrill until you let go!
dwight
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That’s true. Thank you, Dwight!
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There’s a whole lot to ponder in this one, Frank — very joyfully thought provoking.
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It is meant to be joyful. I am glad you liked it, Shannon!
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This just made me want to shout Whee!
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That’s what a swing can do. Thank you, Candy!
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Yes, there is a joy in letting go!
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Yes, even on the swing. Thank you, Annell!
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“But the joy when we let go.” Simply profound, Frank! 🙂
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Thank you, Frank!
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This is so sweet – it brings back wonderful memories of being on a swing as a kid!
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you, Jo!
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So much comes from the letting go. This makes me want to find a swing and remember that feeling of feet toward the sky.
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I only do it now in my imagination, but I suppose there are other ways to let go. Thank you, Ali!
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What a lovely, fun poem, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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