Landscapes lying in the stone.
You and I are not alone.
Suddenly what’s far comes near
When the starlings reappear.
Linked to dVerse Poetics. Sarah is hosting. The feature photo is by Mary Frances.
Landscapes lying in the stone.
You and I are not alone.
Suddenly what’s far comes near
When the starlings reappear.
Linked to dVerse Poetics. Sarah is hosting. The feature photo is by Mary Frances.
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Oh, Frank, you’ve given me goosebumps. I like the way yoi switch perspectives here.
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Thank you, Sarah! And thank you for the prompt today.
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Your poem reads like a spell from Macbeth, Frank!
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I am glad it sounds like a spell. Thank you, Kim!
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Love the way it can be read as both a bit scary, or just as the beautiful starlings reappearing
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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I look forward to their reappearance because I know they will bring their new babies to visit!
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They will. Thank you, Peter!
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There is a sense of time here, as if you’ve been enjoying the landscape for awhile, as they reappear. Lingering enjoyment is what I feel while reading. Wonderful Frank.
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Thank you, Jade!
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You are welcome 🙂
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Such a beautiful moment in time you have created Frank.
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Thank you, Linda!
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good story in two brief couplets
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Thank you, Larry!
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Splendid brevity, terrific match to the stone. I see the white funnel cloud as a tornado .
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Thank you, Glenn!
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I love “what’s afar then comes near”.
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Thank you, Mary!
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You have packed a lot of mystery in 4 lines and the rhyming scheme adds to the magic.
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Thank you, Truedessa!
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Brilliant!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Landscapes ….. wonderful in its brevity … by Frank Hubeny
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Thank you, Reena!
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I like how you’ve captured the artist’s imagination.
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Thank you!
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I love the hope your couplets inspire.
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Thank you, Astrid!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Pragalbha!
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I liked that a lot. I was scared and then a sigh of relief 🙂
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Thank you, Christine!
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Starling Sun Flowers
We All Are within now
inside outside above
so below born Above
From Super Nova
Explosion
Crucible
FireS Now
All Around
Resurrecting
Sentient Star
Dust Standing
Tall Our Sun
Just another
FLoWeR NoWTHeN
to Explode Seeding
Potential Sentient Star Dust
Again As All Is Garden All
Is Flower All Is
Seed
We
come
From: to:
We Are All Star
Flowers And Seeds too..
SMiLes Frank Now May
YouR Star FLoWeR Continue to Rise..:)
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Thank you, Fred!
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SMiLes..
Welcome
Frank..:)
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a lovely message of hope woven from Mary’s stunning art 🙂
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Thank you, Kate!
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welcome Frank!
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This is inspiring, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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Seems like a sunny twist in the middle. Lovely, Frank!
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Thank you, Sara!
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