Today what rhymes may seem surreal
With culture preaching, “People, Kneel.
Meter’s there to mess your mind.
You dared to look? Then dare to find."
Linked to dVerse Poetics where Linda Lee Lyberg is hosting with the theme ‘surreal’. I don’t know if this poem is surreal or not but it makes significantly less sense now than it did when I wrote it a few minutes ago so perhaps it is.
Poetry, Short Prose and Walking 
Done in true Frank fashion. And I love your explanation!
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Thank you, Linda! And thanks for hosting.
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But what’s a rhyme without some reason
with yellow brollies out of season
and meter’s gone, there is no more.
Yet though I looked, I never saw.
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Very nicely surreal! Thank you, Peter!
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Be prudent, since what you find
might mess my fragile mind
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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After I completely lost my mind
it was no longer there for me to find.
I prayed to God my mind to recover,
and was told only for a lover.
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Very nice, Glenn!
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surreal poem and pics … mangroves lend themselves to twisted tales 🙂
Are these your pics Frank?
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Yes, they are my photos using my phone on walks. Thank you, Kate!
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wow must be a good phone as they are great shots Frank, kudos 🙂
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The last line caps it beautifully.
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Thank you, Reena!
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That last line is like a zen koan. (K)
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It could be. Thank you, Kerfe!
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Meter’s there to mess your mind…..smiling at that line! 🙂 Oh yeah!
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It sometimes messes with mine. Thank you, Lillian!
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LOVE it, Frank!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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my pleasure 🙂
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Oh I love this! Dare to look? Then dare to find! Wow!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Smiles True Frank What
Spoon-Fed God is
THeRE to Seek and Find
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Thank you, Fred!
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SMiLes Frank
Happy Thanks
Giving Week
to: Your
Loved
One From:
EveryWHeRe HoMe..:)
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Hmmm, very intriguing, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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I like it. The picture with the crooked trees is an excellent choice for it
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Thank you!
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