Those boxed rectangles with bland colors offer some differentiation but that’s not enough. The white is what’s important not what steps on it to stand out.
Unless those squares let white show through, there’s nothing they can do except to blandly block the view.
But then I heard and understood. It’s not those ghostly squares. They’re the victims. It’s that deathly white itself, the very stuff I thought was pure. I almost didn’t see it. Now I do, burying, as if it could, the light that would shine through.
Empty restaurants Birds will nest in time for spring Water flows and falls
Linked to dVerse Haibun Monday. Kim Russell is hosting with the theme of Piet Mondrian’s ‘Broadway Boogie Woogie’.
New York City from the Empire State Building
Really cool haibun, Frank. I like how you get into the esthetics of art without losing NYC as your focal point, The haiku is exemplary, per usual for you.
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I don’t know NYC very well, but I have walked Broadway a few times. Thank you, Glenn!
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Love your pictures… and your description… as nature takes its course!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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your haibun is very deep, can be understood at many levels, good to ponder!
great shots, love those cobbles and does reflect the prompt pic!
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Thank you, Kate! I hoped the square cobbles would fit this.
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you nailed it Frank!
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The white is indeed empty of people right now, but the birds are filling in nicely. Lets hope we leave them enough room when we return. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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I like your take on this Frank. You have provided much to ponder in this one. This line grabbed me, “The white is what’s important not what steps on it to stand out.”
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Thank you, Ali!
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Interesting. It’s the white that speaks to you and not the bold primary colors. This has been an. interesting challenge.
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Thank you, Beverly!
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Interesting. It’s the white that speaks to you and not the bold primary colors. This has been an. interesting challenge.
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Insightful interpretation of white spaces! Reminds me of ‘white noise’, where high frequencies interact to bring about a deep silence.
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Thank you, Reena!
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ah! love your take on the photo. such a breathtaking haiku, too.
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Thank you!
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This haibun effectively conveys the desolation of Covid 19…which doesn’t affect the birds.
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The birds are free of this. Thank you, Lynn!
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A beautiful haibun as a whole. What sings from the heights for me is:
“I almost didn’t see it. Now I do, burying, as if it could, the light that would shine through.”
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Thank you, Jade!
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You are welcome.
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I feel the loneliness in your words Frank. Well done.
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There is loneliness there. Thank you, Linda!
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The white can be the sorrow of all those lives lost.
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It could be. Thank you, Bjorn!
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I particularly like your haiku, Frank. I think of a city like NY City, and even Boston’s hub….as being hollow now. Cavernous because of Covid. I sadly think it will be a long time before restaurants, broadway, the Met etc will be fully operational again. A virus has brought big cities and humanity to its knees.
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It has affected us in unexpected ways. I would not have expected anything like this last February. Thank you, Lillian!
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Sidewalk
Lined
Souls…
Waves Smiling
Out of Concrete
Shores Expanding More..:)
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Thank you, Fred!
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SMiLes Frank
Happy Wednesday!
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The white is what’s important, not what steps on it. ..something to think about, and I will!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Love the way you see this, Frank. The white spaces being important really made me think about this piece again.
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Thank you, Sara!
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