George was told that the fall colors this year were particularly beautiful near the nature center and so he went there and followed a trail leading from the picnic tables by the river.
He hadn’t thought that he had ever been there before, a place where parents would take young children, but then the fountain of his memory opened. He recalled that there should be a loop up ahead of this trail leading back to the center and sure enough there it was with the remembered rustic rail fencing and signs. He also remembered his father and uncle slowly walking behind him while his mother and aunt were waiting for them with sandwiches and pie.
As George returned to the nature center, having forgotten all about the foliage, a rush of regret and remorse led to repentance, something he should have expressed decades ago, for all of his idle words and rebellious deeds directed against his family. Leaving the center he felt a burden lift from his heart opening a future he had not imagined was even there before, but which had been waiting for him all this time.
Denise offers the prompt word “fountain” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories. I was thinking of the last two verses of Psalm 138.
Great photo and story. You do these well, Frank.
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Thank you, Dan!
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Ah, the path of repentance. It is so powerful. Thanks for the great story. Blessings.
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It is a powerful path. Thank you, Michael, and blessings to you!
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Moments like this are liberating ….
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They are liberating. Thank you, Dora!
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What a wonderful story with a beautiful message for all of us. I’m so impressed you can do this in six sentences!
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I am glad you liked this story, Laura! Thank you!
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It’s not too late to repent. Great story and nice photo, Frank.
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It is not too late to repent as George found out. Thank you, Miriam!
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Yes, it’s never too late, just need to be in time, Frank!
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Both your story and the photo are beautiful.
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Thank you, Romi!
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‘Leaving the center he felt a burden lift from his heart opening a future he had not imagined was even there before, but which had been waiting for him all this time.’ Great line in a fine piece of reminiscence.
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Thank you, Doug!
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Nature inspires!
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That walk definitely helped him in ways he did not expect. Thank you, Liz!
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A beautiful story with a beautiful message.
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Thank you, Indira!
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Welcome, Frank.
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beautifully done, beautifully told, excellent use of the cue. Good six!
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Thank you!
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Makes you wonder at times – a somewhat arbitrary interaction causes an (re)action as simple as taking a walk in the woods to enjoy the beauty of fall foliage. The body never forgets. Call it divine intervention or life’s attempt at balancing an individual scale.
What an excellent metaphor you used Frank, of the leaves preparing for winter, for your character’s own “transformation”.
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He went through an unexpected transformation. Thank you, Denise!
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The power of nature! Memory invoked, repentance sought and a heavy burden lifted. Delightful, Frank!
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He did have a burden he didn’t know he was carrying lifted. Thank you, Chris!
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I’m with the others, particularly Paul and Denise; excellent choice in manifestation of the prompt (noun, yet, nearly verb and the parallel construction (or subtext or whatever the correct term in rhetoric may be) of not only death and remembrance but change and transformation.
damn!*
*compliment on a very fine Six
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Thank you, Clark! I am glad this story of change and transformation worked.
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This is such a powerful story! Wow that made me think of memeories I had then finding a place that suddenly I recall being there before…but with a spiritual twist in this story! Wow grateful for this Gospel pointing story!
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I am glad you found this powerful. I hoped it would have such effect. Thank you, Jim! And blessings.
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I pray God uses it
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Sometimes a walk in nature can help clear the mind in marvelous ways.
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It did help him. Thank you, Mimi! I enjoyed your story about Ms. G’s cat dying of leukemia. It was very empathetically told.
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Beautiful SSS. It truly is never too late to repent, and sometimes it requires being at just the right place at the right time for certain memories to be stirred that leads one to understand oneself and his past interactions with others, finding new found meaning and a desire to change.
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I imagine him being grateful for all that happened to him on that walk. Thank you, Pat!
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Never too late to find peace, Frank
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Good point. Thank you!
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Communing with nature has a way of opening the mind. Nice one Frank.
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Thank you, Keith! George did receive an unexpected revelation. It was much better than the foliage could have been.
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I like the elements of family and nature at play for a personal journey.
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Thank you! Family and nature do seem to go together in this story.
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And maybe, through this experience, he found the peace of self-forgiveness too? Beautiful story.
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Yes, I’m sure he did. Thank you, Jenne!
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Well done, the imagery was great
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Thank you, Anne!
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So many questions that need no answer as George has redemption … great 6, Frank.
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Yes, I think has has redemption. Thank you, Laura!
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“fountain of his memory”
Nice, and just what he needed to move forward.
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Yes, the needed to remember and repent. Thank you!
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A great story about finding inner peace.
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Thank you, Mark!
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