Detail—Six Sentence Story

Neil recalculated using a different ratio of aligned nuclei in his controversial water-hydrogen model. Fifteen minutes later the results gave him the number he was looking for, 7576.3, with intermediate computations validating the steps, but with an uncertainty of 21.2. He wanted a tighter uncertainty before submitting his paper to the Institute, but the main result, regardless of the uncertainty detail, was well below Hardy’s upper bound of 7670.

Neil’s wife called from downstairs, Earth to Daddy, pizza’s ready!

His daughter also called, Earth to Daddy, pizza, pizza, pizza!

Neil walked down the stairs, picked up his giggling daughter, kissed his smiling wife and led a prayer of thanksgiving over the food knowing that, whatever the uncertainty, his family had much to rejoice over.

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Denise offers the prompt word “detail” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories.

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Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

21 thoughts on “Detail—Six Sentence Story”

  1. Pizza x 1³. Priorities, right?! Good reminder, Frank. Easy to get caught up in work, especially at “crunch” time.
    At the end of the metaphorical day, it’s about enjoying every moment possible with family and friends.

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  2. I’m with the others*
    Fun Six as a combination of engaging story from inside the protagonist’s head transitioning into a world more complete for the presence of family.

    no, really! lol

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