Challenge—Six Sentence Story

Thinking of himself as a miniscule speck on a miniscule planet lost in a non-miniscule universe challenged Brian’s mind. He hoped aliens from a galaxy far far away would come with their advanced technology to tell the world what life was all about. Only they could save him and the world he lived in.

Passing a church Brian heard people singing songs of joy because the Lord had come. He complained to the wind about deluded people who thought there was a God out there working miracles on their behalf.

At least that’s what he did until the miracle occurred which allows me to end this meaningless tale that was going nowhere as Brian suddenly stopped running his mouth and wept for joy.

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Denise offers the word “challenge” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories.

May the Lord bless you this Christmas season

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Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

23 thoughts on “Challenge—Six Sentence Story”

  3. Great Christmas song and much appreciated. I am so impressed I am going to post this on my Facebook page> Thank you Frank and Merry Christmas and a blessed New Year to you and yours!

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  10. two thing about this Six: 1) “…miniscule planet lost in a non-miniscule universe” b) the hook at the ending and 3) the touch of ‘meta’ to your ending.
    very cool

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