Six Sentence Story: The Chance of a Lifetime

Although Timothy treated no one badly, neither was he very kind. He plan was to keep himself busy looking for the chance of a lifetime that kept slipping from his grasp.

His view of God wasn’t all that different from his view of anyone else he didn’t pay much attention to. Should someone ask him if he loved his neighbor as himself, he’d say, Sure, why not?

One day it was Timothy’s day to go through the pearly gates. Although he got through (perhaps by the skin of his pearly teeth or perhaps because there really is Someone who generously hands out unmerited mercy – if the heart can handle it – rather than gotcha karma with interest), he regretted all he could have done differently when he had – all along – that chance of a lifetime.

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Denise offers the prompt word “plan” for this week’s Six Sentence Stories.

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Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

25 thoughts on “Six Sentence Story: The Chance of a Lifetime”

  1. Seeing as how the majority of the world population have decided to forego living in accordance with the second main scriptural tenant- love your neighbor- I would think they are finding heaven a lot less crowded these days…..

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  2. At first I was thinking similarly as Clark – wouldn’t that have been hell. Then it hit me perhaps Timothy qualified more for Purgatory which, I suppose might be even worse than hell. You’re almost to heaven but… not quite.
    Misky’s comment rings true. Glad Timothy got there anyway.

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  3. i’ve always loved the whole pearly gates cartoon of standing at the gates in a line…. with an angel standing there date stamping your entrance…. or as a kid it could be the wizard of oz or even santa claus standing there behind a rather large tall podium with round glasses and a really really really big book with pages and pages of unending pages of names listed alphabetically and he asks one question… how did you treat your dog? … i’m sure that would surprise a lot of people….

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