Change that is rhythmically sound
Reminds us that time runs around
Like a seasonal wheel.
Endless cycles conceal
What is firm giving thanks for the ground.
Written for the Limerick Challenge Week 39: Seasons.
Grounding Change
18 thoughts on “Grounding Change”
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Poetry, Short Prose and Walking 
Very nice, tricky one this week!
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Thanks, draliman!
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wow. a deep and wise piece! 🙂
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Thank you, rosemawrites!
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you’re welcome!
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I really like this. I struggled with this week’s prompt. Well done!
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Thanks, Meg! There are a lot of seasons to cover in five lines. I’m not sure “wheel” does it justice, but it is done.
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Oh and well done!
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Frank, this is so nicely done. It was a tough prompt!
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Thank you, ladieswholunchreviews!
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You’re welcome, Frank. BTW, I’m Diane 🙂
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Wheels and cycles, they work in tandem!!!! Lovely limerick Frank.
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Thanks, Meritings! The closest I got to all the seasons is a wheel.
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Great one! Love the line “change that is rhythmically sound”. The piece itself has a lovely rhythm, reflecting the rhythm of the seasons.
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Thanks, magarisa! I am glad you liked the “rhymically sound” idea!
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I liked how you used the wheel of time to cover all four seasons! Well done, Frank 🙂
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Thanks, Mind and Life Matters!
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You’re welcome, Frank. Please call me Rashmi 🙂
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