Robert Frost called it the “sound of sense”. I bust that phrase into two and think of it as “sound” and “sense”, but Frost more accurately describes the reality of poetry. Still he doesn’t completely describe poetry, because no one can. That’s a good thing. It gives the rest of us and our descendants for the next hundreds of millions, or billions, of years something new to do.
My view of sense is taking me into two different directions. After reading Jane Kohut-Bartel’s “Song of the Nightingale”, I want to understand better the 8th century Japanese collection, the Man’yōshū. After reading Debbie Roth’s Forgiving Fridays, I want to learn more about Hafiz (and Rumi) and the theme of forgiveness. Along these two ways of sense may the sound that’s right appear.
TWO PATHS LEAD AHEAD
SNOW HIDES SUMMER’S LEAFY WAYS
BOTH LOOK NOW LIKE ONE
Text: Linked to dVerse Haibun Monday where Toni is hosting asking us to write about our plans.
Photo: “Future Mystery” by the author.
Wow Frank! This is great. And I love that you want to know more of Man’yōshū. You are digging deep with this. I love that you want to learn more of poetry and the writers. A most wonderful goal. I like your plans muchly!
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Thank you, Toni! Best wishes on your writing!
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To learn more, to dig deeper is as to experience a richness of the mind and soul; an exciting trip.
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It is a plan where I expect to be surprised with what I find. Thank you, Vivian!
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Please share if you find gold nuggets 😊
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Your talents and your quest fascinate me. It is good to surround yourself with poets, for we are all in lesson, and there is still a lot to learn. I think it was Kerouac who called himself “an outlaw of the sensorium”–I dig that, and continue to use it as mantra.
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That’s an interesting mantra. I figure I learn from people even when I am not consciously doing so. Hopefully it is all for the best. Thank you, Glenn!
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I like the idea of paths that come together to become more. (K)
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The paths look separate and the two I mentioned are quite different, but I am hoping to see some common ground between them. Thank you!
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Wow, Frank. As you step off the rim of the Universe and go after the Great Man’yoshu, I wish I was there to peek into your heart! I remember the first reaction I had upon reading the Man’yoshu: one of utter recognition. These poems spoke to my afflictions, my wants and yearnings, and they were written 1500 years ago. They are us. LOL!’ An affirmation of Human Nature.
Your haiku is superb. And you are right: they are one.
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Thank you, Jane! I think I read something of yours about the Man’yoshu earlier this year, but it wasn’t until a couple weeks ago that I realized what it was and that it would be worthwhile to read. It takes time even to see what is in front of us.
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LOL! Sometimes like 1500 years!
I have written several essays about the Man’yoshu, and one of them is in the back of “Song” I believe, or somewhere published. It is a study that gladdens the soul, and excites our passionate natures.
The Man’yoshu is so worthwhile to read.
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Your “Song of the Nightingale” is a beautiful story in verse. It is with your book in the back of my mind that I am reading the Man’yoshu.
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I am honored in your doing so, Frank. Thank you. As we have talked about there are many editions of the Man’yoshu. Or, there is now. And I am partial to Wright’s version. He centered down on some of the evocative poems in the entire document.
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Nice take on that. I’m going to be checking on the leafy summer paths that all look alike now thanks to snow!
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Many of those paths do look alike and may even lead to the same destination. Thank you, Jacqui!
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Rumi and ruminating. But in a great way.
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I have all the books, now experiencing where they lead. Thank you, Elizabeth!
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I recently lucked into a Mary Oliver book on how to write poetry. I look forward to when I can sit down with it in earnest. I love learning new poetry forms and have been known to actually read a poetry dictionary. May you be ever enriched on your journey, but don’t get too cold in the snow.
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I often find the snow is peaceful, but I will try to stay warm. I have read many of Mary Oliver’s works. I suspect in her own way she is as good as Hafiz. Thank you, Linda!
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Im glad you said no one can describe poetry. I don’t feel alone now. Maybe it is just the sound that makes sense to the one reciting or writing it. I was told by a writer/editor friend that poetry is saying the most using the least words. I kind of like that. I do enjoy learning the different forms.
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Everyone has to express it through their own subjectivity and that makes it ever new. I suspect a human reader’s subjectivity rewrites a poem while reading it. A robot just recites it. I like the idea you expressed of poetry being able to say the most in the least words. Thank you, Mary!
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I like the inspiration you drew from Robert Frost. Also, thank you for linking to those other posts and sharing all of that poetry with us.
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I often go back to Frost although I like Mary Oliver better. Reading Hafiz and the Man’yoshu are tasks I would not have thought of doing without reading about them from other people. Thank you!
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Just managed to find a pdf on manyoshu, for an introductory flavor. Hope it lends warmth in winter. Thank you so much, Frank!
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I am reading a pdf version as well. There are other translations I expect to try once I finish that one. Thank you, Reena!
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“I bust that phrase into two” … This makes me happy.
Also this:
“That’s a good thing. It gives the rest of us and our descendants for the next hundreds of millions, or billions, of years something new to do.”
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I do think our species will be around that long which is kind of a deep future. I hope we do well with it. Thank you, Shawna!
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You have two great options. It’s wonderful to have specific readings in mind. I am generally so short of time that my reading list keeps increasing 🙂 All the best to you
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My list keeps increasing as well and many books I don’t finish, but these two topics are somewhat special, more than just reading the poems once–or so I hope at the moment. Thank you!
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I love how you tied it back to Frost and that haiku to me reflecting back to his yellow woods… all there and the ambition to learn more.
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It does link to that yellow woods although here both paths are taken. I am glad you noticed that. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Love the haiku, Frank 🙂
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Thank you, Jane!
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🙂
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reading and digging deep into other authors and their writing enriches us in so many ways, i like how you broke up sound and sense, made me think how we sense sound through our skin like how we feel a touch.
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The idea of “sound of sense” is deeper and more mysterious, but it seems more convenient to break them up at least temporarily. Thank you, Gina!
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Perhaps all paths are actually one….love that haiku!!
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I think at some level they are. Thank you, Annell!
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I need some Rumi
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Both Rumi and Hafiz are unfamiliar to me except for what I’ve read on Debbie Roth’s pages. I’m reading Daniel Ladinsky’s “The Gift” now which is an enjoyable translation of sorts of Hafiz’ ghazals, but I think Gertrude Bell’s 19th century translation may be better. However, I don’t know much about either poet. Thanks, Jane!
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Some beautiful video of Rumi poetry on you tube.
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Thanks! I found a reading of Gertrude Bell’s translation of Hafiz there last night.
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Hafiz and Rumi are two of my favorite poets – they are known as mystical poets, from my understanding, along with other poets like Kabir. There’s a great collection of Rumi poems called “The Rumi Collection” translated by Helminksi. Happy to give you other references if you’re interested. (You can email me at weloveyou@forgivingconnects.com) Blessings! Debbie
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I have the translation by Coleman Barks. I’ll keep the one by Helminski on my list. I’ll see where these take me. Thank you for the offer for further references, Debbie. As I move along in these readings and get some questions I may get back to you or just post on your site.
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That sounds great Frank! Whatever inspires you. 🙂 Lovely to share. Many blessings. Debbie
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I understand so well the paths you have chosen to pursue…two of my favorite genres of poetry. I will be watching for their influence in your posts.
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I know very little about either one. Thanks, Victoria!
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I was interested to read about your inspirations and interests, Frank. I look forward to seeing how it influences your writing and poetry.
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I plan to real along those two lines over the next few months. I’m not sure where they will take me. Thank you, Robbie!
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I love this! It really made me smile. 🙂
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SMiLes More
With Thanks too..:)
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Frank, this is magnificent. I am so grateful to know you and read your poetry and explorations of what touches you. The thing that really got me about this poem is that it moved me beyond the mind and senses into an experience of the great love inside of me. Thank you. (This by the way is often my experience with Rumi and Hafiz). I’m honored to contribute this post for Forgiving Fridays. Blessings 🙂 , Debbie
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Thank you, Debbie! I’ve heard of Hafiz and Rumi before, but I have not read much of them before. I am glad you posted them on your site.
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A beautiful haiku Frank – I do believe the two paths will become one as you bring the strands together ☺
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They should become one like many paths we take. Thank you, Xenia!
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