Maple trees rest in the snow
Covered with their fallen leaves.
Winter’s wind will come and go,
But maple trees stand in the snow.
Their roots hold on. Let winter go
And have its way. Though some may grieve,
The maple trees wait in the snow
Covered calmly by their leaves.
Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar. Jilly hosts with the theme of repetitive forms.

The calming words in this reflect the theme of patience – love that! As always, I enjoy your audio. (I am struggling a bit with putting in my sound cloud on the new version of WP – could only get the large version to post.)
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I take whatever code is in the “embed” option after clicking “share” on the SoundCloud site and then paste it using the “html” option of WP rather than the regular WP editor. Thank you for the prompt, Jilly! Repetition is often forgotten in poems.
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Ak! I tried that and it gave me some kind of error message. I was hoping you knew the magic, Frank! Back to the drawing – or blocking – board. Look, if you get tired of the patient maple trees in all that snow, c’mon down to Orlando. The Lyman’s will buy you dinner and you can show me how to fix this. 🙂
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Very nicely done, Frank, and so seasonal! I like the caesurae in the fifth and sixth lines – they came as a surprise and foreground the message in those lines beautifully!
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I am glad you liked that break in the flow. Thank you, Kim!
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Such a lovely triolet… love the small variations here, and a great way to describe the resting maple.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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You seem to excel in any form; nice piece; the refrains work well.
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Thank you, Glenn!
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Your words have a calming undercurrent through all the changes unfolding.
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I’m glad. Thank you, Pragalbha!
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Nicely done, and very picturesque.
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Thank you, V.J.!
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My pleasure, Frank.
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evokes peace and acceptance of the season.
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Thank you!
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Excellent, Frank! A spot-on attack of the form. Love the pictures, too.
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Thank you, Charley!
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You are welcome, Frank!
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Layers to lull the reader into peacefulness.
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Peaceful and colourful!
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very evocative. I love the sparseness of the poem which reflects the winter perfectly.
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This is your forté frank and you do it so well.
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Thank you, Linda!
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I like the personification of the maple trees here – brave, patient, hopeful.
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Thank you, Imelda!
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Oh the quiet waiting. The mind in its moment . Soothing and centered. Thanks for this Frank
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Thank you, Lona!
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Very lovely, gorgeous image 🖤
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Thank you!
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This is calm and soothing. I like how the maple trees rest and stand and wait–like they will endure no matter what.
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Thank you, Merril!
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While being away from dVerse during this poetical winter, your reposeful rhymes are dearly missed in my heart and ear, Frank. Glad to be back for a quick visit.
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I am glad you liked them. Thank you, Colin!
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I like the grounding I feel when I read the line about the roots holding while “letting winter go.” It’s calming to know patience can feel this way and not with frantic striving.
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They do ground through winter. Thank you, Amaya!
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