Jim knew that random stuff couldn’t all be his fault. Some of it was bad luck. And as for the rest, he intended to get even with Mark and his girlfriend Denise for dodging their involvement by witnessing against him.
The judge sentenced him to thirty years saying that at Jim’s age that would give him a good chunk of the rest of his life to think it over and give the community respite from his stony heart.
After two of those decades Jim was surprised to hear that first Mark and later Denise both died from natural causes. In his own last years he forgot all about luck and wished he could have seen either of them once again to tell them how sorry he was for wasting their lives.
Linked to GirlieOnTheEdge’s Six Sentence Story with the prompt word “random”.


That fellow in the bottom picture must have had a hard time in prison, being a grass!
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At least he got out. Thank you, Peter!
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20 years is a long time during which to come to terms with oneself. Better late than never.
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Better late than never. Thank you!
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Sometimes it takes a lot of living and thinking to see the situation as it was. Good use of the prompt in your SSS. As to the grass in the picture, I recognize it, and those roots go deep, deep enough to flourish even in prison.
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Thank you, Pat! I am glad the intent of the grass growing out of those blocks made sense.
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You left us on the edge waiting for chapter 2
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That is good. Thank you, Dwight!
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Love this six. A long time to reflect, for changes to occur, evaluations, regrets, wishes, and to grow.
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Thank you! Sometimes it takes a long time.
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Time, which seems to be a theme this week, will exact a price from all, anticipating the nature of that price is the challenge.
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I will hopefully be willing to pay the price whatever it turns out to be. Thank you!
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https://paperkutzs.com/2020/08/06/six-sentence-stories-turning/
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Thank you!
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I think perhaps those 2 “friends” should shoulder their own blame. (K)
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They should have. Thank you, Kerfe!
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This was indeed heartbreaking. Well done and very real. Good use of the cue.
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Thank you!
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It’s a long time, twenty years, but well spent if he’s come to some accountability and remorse. It does make you wonder how the other two fared.
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I imagine they had their own turnings at least hopefully. Thank you!
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Prison does make some people. A man who was sentenced to life originally is now out and a beloved staff member of our church.
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I have known people like that as well. Thank you!
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Flowers Forgive Cracks
In Stones For Without
Them How Will They Grow..:)
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They need those cracks. Thank you, Fred!
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Hehe i fell
Through
The
Cracks
And Found
Myself in
India Again
In The Netherlands
Long Story Frank.. Hehe🙌
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Things have a way of turning our supposed to happens into most likely to happen.
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They do. Thank you, Lisa!
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We all have regrets. Touching story, Frank.
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Thank you! Good point that we all have regrets.
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Interesting story! I wonder if Mark or Denise ever had the same regrets for what they did to him?
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Initially I didn’t think they would have such regrets, but I wonder if I developed the story further, it might be worthwhile to allow them to struggle with regrets and yearning for forgiveness as well. Thank you!
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Sometimes we need solitude to see what’s going on inside us. Good 6. arlene
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Thank you, Arlene!
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