It’s over there If you would see, If you’re not scared Of mystery. Unlock your mind, Walk out and find Reality.
Linked to Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo Prompt. The photo above was provided by Sue Vincent for this prompt.
The poem’s form is called a Ha’sonnet, assuming I did it right.

I’ve no idea whether you did it right but I like it!
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I’m not sure I got it right either. Thank you, Peter!
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Great poem, Frank!
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Thank you, Crystal!
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Utterly appropriate for this spot, Frank.
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Thank you, Sue!
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Thank you!
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Yay, you wrote us a ha’sonnet!! Interesting thoughts within it–as a woman who thinks entirely too much, I’m not scared of mystery, but sometimes I wish I could lock up my mind and have a break 🙂
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The form seems a little too short, but that may be because I am not used to it. Thanks for introducing me to the form by writing your own Ha’sonnet and linking to the other site where it is featured.
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It is short, sometimes hard to fit every thought within it…when that happens I rewrite in another form 🙂 You’re so welcome, Frank–the more the merrier!!
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Perfect Frank, I am struggling with this one, I am bereft of inspiration 💜
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May inspiration come to you. Thank you, Willow!
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It’s not looking good
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Lovely. I can’t do a metered anything. I can count syllables 😀
I love going into my yard and discovering the reality that is there 🌼
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The meter also has to pattern the accents. I tend to miss most of what is around me. Thank you, Jules!
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Wonderful, Frank! The mystery of life can be beautiful to see if you just look.
Thanks for trying a ha’sonnet! They are short, just a reflection of a moment, a thought, a picture. I sometimes like them to be completed by the reader filling in the detail as they read it. And you have the form correct, meeting the line and syllable requirements and the setup and twist. You even put in rhyme which wasn’t required by the inventors. Well done!
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Thank you! Short poems or prose need the reader to fill in the details which they will if they enjoyed it.
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Great use of the prompt, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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Very nice, Frank! 🙂
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Thank you, Felicia!
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Your words depict why I named my blog Our Eyes Open. Open your eyes, live in the moment and see what you normally dismiss as common. Nice one! 🙂
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Beyond Below Above..:)
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Thank you, Fred!
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🌊💫
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