When things went well I'd rarely say I ought to credit God or fate, Statistically at any rate. I took full credit for my day At least when outcomes went my way. The magic dust no one could see I thought I sprinkled liberally. I don't know why I gave up this. I did. Perhaps it was that kiss, That slap, of Grace that conquered me.
Linked to Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge where the challenge is to use the word “fate” in the B lines of a décima having the rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC.


Grace is a slap and a kiss! Accurate. This kind of has John Donne vibes, even though it’s not a sonnet. 😍
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I am glad is sounds like a John Donne poem. Thank you, Jenna!
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I loved this poem and the ending! The photos are absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you, Pragalbha! The poem is an attempt to understand the changes going on in my life recently.
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You are very welcome. Wish you lots of ease through the changes!
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WOW, Frank–this is knock-me-over-brilliant!
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome!
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Lots of truth here.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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We take all the credit for our good days! That gave me a laugh.
I love the melody of this one.
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Thank you, Elizabeth!
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That’s excellent Frank. Well crafted.
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Thank you, Arthur!
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bravo!
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Thank you!
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