Lost Time – Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction

Autumn Trail's Yellow and Red

Thinking back Bill wished he did things differently years ago. Not that he would have had any basis to change given what he knew then, but he wished he knew then what he knew now.

His son Clifford was screaming obscenities at him. He saw himself through his father’s eyes and cringed. He realized he deserved the scorn, but for reasons Clifford wouldn’t acknowledge.

Bill regretted all this lost time.  How could he make things right now?  He considered praying and cringed again. Was it a miracle, he wondered, when embarrassed he bent his knees, cringed and finally understood?


Linked to Carrot Ranch November 5 Flash Fiction Challenge where Charli Mills offers the theme of “lost time” for these stories of 99 words.

Red Autumn Trail

Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

13 thoughts on “Lost Time – Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction”

  1. The wisdom time brings us. This is just so true to life. How many people live to regret things they did or didn’t do? Said or didn’t say? Loved or didn’t love? Some regret more than others.
    Nice one!

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