Temptation’s pretty finger draws
me pleasantries to tease desire
which burns when my mind’s set on fire.
I freely chose. I was the cause
and not deterministic laws.
Then demons set my mind to sleep.
Their cackling rises from the deep.
Perhaps I did not fail? I shake
as nightmares make assumptions quake
and leave a scream or two to keep.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “cause” to be used in an A line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s Decima Challenge.


Beautiful ❤
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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The challenge is that I always “freely choose”.
Great photos!
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We make those choices. Thank you, Michael!
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This is lovely.💜
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Thank you, Willow!
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Always a pleasure Frank 💜
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“the devil made me do it” is not an excuse that will hold. I wholly agree “I was the cause
and not deterministic laws.” Great post.
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Good point about the devil making me do something. Thank you, Oneta!
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So perfect!!
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Thank you, Pragalbha!
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Thank you, Oneta!
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