Lot didn’t want to leave that day,
but angels dragged them by the hand.
His daughters didn’t understand.
His wife looked back. She’d have to stay.
“I drifted slowly from the way
through sweet deception. What a blow:
I thought I knew; I didn’t know.
That’s why we’re rushing out of there.
We heard the screaming in the air,
but it has stopped. We have to go.”
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “blow” to be used in a C line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC in this week’s challenge. I was thinking about Lot and Sodom from Genesis 19.


Amazing how you incorporate prompts and specific patterns into a beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Pragalbha! I am glad you liked this.
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Wow Frank, so very well done. I really like how this turned out. Nice work!
Pat
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Thank you, Pat!
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I love it when a prompt becomes a powerful poem!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Excellent brother. What a great story we have here. Many lessons for sure. Just read it again lately.
Blessings.
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Thank you, Michael!
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Very well done! Especially the difference between the first and second stanzas.
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Thank you, Jenna!
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Very well done
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Thank you, Willow! I am glad you liked this.
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I always feel sorry for Lots wife 💜
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It is sad what happened to her. Thank you, Willow!
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Yes one little look .
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Well done. Unfortunately for Mrs. Lot, those moments have to be abandoned completely without looking back~
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It was unfortunate for her. I wonder if I would have looked back as well. Thank you, Larry!
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Love that its based in Genesis
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I was thinking of Lot recently and why he didn’t really want to leave Sodom. Thank you, Jim!
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🙂👍
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Loved it 👏🤍
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Thank you, Ashi!
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Nice work!
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Thank you, Mark!
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