Reject deception. Walk in light.
Have fellowship and know what’s true.
Let’s show it in the things we do.
Don’t stumble through the dark of night.
Confess: we haven’t done what’s right.
We’ve stained ourselves repeatedly.
They ate the fruit. In turn are we
blocked from entering the garden.
Blood brings righteousness and pardon.
It cleanses. Jesus cleanses me.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “garden” to be used in a D line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s challenge. I am thinking of 1 John 1.


So thankful Jesus cleanses us. Great poem! Blessings.
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Thank you and blessings, Michael!
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Frank,
I like your use of imperatives and the active voice: and the ending, a passive (glad) acceptance of the power of Jesus’s blood which is the active agent of our receiving cleansing, righteousness. Well done.
pax,
dora
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Thank you, Dora! Good point: Jesus blood is the active agent.
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Powerful inspiring poem.
Let’s show it in the things we do. – this line is so important I felt.
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We need to show it in the things we do. Thank you, Pragalbha!
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Really good., I’ve been reading something about the need not to delay repentance until death. Satan will always win in the end that way
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Good point: do not delay repentance. Thank you, Larry!
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Michael and Dora have said it all, well done, Frank
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Thank you! I am glad you liked this.
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This is so beautifully put! It is so difficult to distill your thoughts down to that 10-line format!
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Thank you, Rebecca! I am glad you liked this poem.
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Been behind on blog reading; this is a great Garden poem, I see echoes of Eden! Yet you presented Gospel hope!
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I wanted Gospel hope to come through. I am glad it did. Thank you!
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I enjoy that the Gospel is there!!!
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Beautiful and uplifting, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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