Rebelliousness will find its fall.
Self-righteousness will show the way
deceived deceivers go astray.
They think they’ve won, but lost it all.
On wayward paths some hear His call
and follow giving up their pride.
The faithless seek a place to hide.
The leaves descend upon the land
and snowy winter takes a stand.
The warmth’s for those who went inside.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “pride” to be used in a C line of a decima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s challenge.


Brilliant beautiful poem with deep meaning and message. It felt very affirming to read.
Pragalbha Doshi is inviting you to a scheduled Zoom meeting.
The warmth’s for those who went inside – absolutely loved this!
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I am glad you liked this, Pragalbha!
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Excellent Décima 💜💜
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Thank you, Willow! I am glad you liked this.
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I did Frank 💜
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That last line is perfect: “inside” Christ alone is security, warmth.❤️
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He alone is security and warmth. Thank you, Dora!
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Excellent theme.
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Thank you, Chel! I am glad Ronovan picked this prompt word.
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Ah, pride. I have suffered too many times from it. So thankful the freedom of Jesus to release me from its bonds.
Great poem brother.
Blessings.
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We do need Jesus to release us from its bonds. Thank you and blessings.
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Such an accurate description of rebels: “They think they’ve won, but lost it all.”
So many in deep rebellious sins think they won but there will be consequences; sobering
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The consequences will be sobering. Thank you, Jim!
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Sobering indeed!
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These words are quite haunting, Frank.
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Pride can haunt one. Thank you, Robbie!
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