The care they take is on display
as swallows from the rafters swoop.
From nest to ground they make a loop
to feed their young throughout the day.
Can evolution show a way
that’s plausible when all I see
is nature mocking endlessly?
Chance has no chance to make sense here.
There’s much to doubt. They no doubt fear
we’ve lost our gullibility.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “swoop” to be used in a B-line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s challenge.
Frank, are they mockingbirds? I love this. Yes even nature mocks. Nothing makes sense. Only God, so why believe anything else?
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I’m not sure what those birds are. There were many nests under that park picnic area, many birds going in and out. They reminded me of barn swallows that we used to have on my parent’s farm. Good point: Only God makes sense.
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Really cool. Thank you for sharing
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Thank you!
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Another 5-Star piece, Frank!
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Thank you, Zelda!
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Welcome.
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Ah! This is amazing how the birds take care of their young. Beautiful poem Frank
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It is amazing how they do so. Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Good thoughts on the birds’ observations.
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Thank you, Chel!
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Great Décima and wonderful video 💜💜
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Thank you, Willow!
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Most excellent! Love this: “Can evolution show a way that’s plausible when all I see is nature mocking endlessly?”
Blessings.
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Evolution has no plausible explanation for anything of importance. Thank you, Michael!
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Our furry and fine-feathered friends seem to be quite adept at taking care of their young. Humans could learn a lot from their routines.
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They are very competent at taking care of their own. Thank you, Eugenia!
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Most welcome, Frank!
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“Chance” is a horrible foundation for everything; good one!
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Thank you! Chance is a horrible foundation.
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100% right
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Nature is a designed miracle. 🙂
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Good description of nature: a “designed miracle”. Thank you, Mark!
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