The entrance from the street was locked long ago still George waited for the iron bars to rust away. Perhaps it would turn out as the dark spirits predicted, though everyone knew they were liars, that one day the whole doorway would collapse letting the riff-raff in, but now those crossed bars mirrored a knot of frustration in his throat he couldn’t swallow down.
George remembered how that very door swayed open allowing anyone ready to enter to do so. Unfortunately, that was when he didn’t have much oil in his lamp and his clothes were stained. When the door shut he knocked on it demanding management give him more time to get ready. That was when he got so, ever ever so, demonically annoyed upon hearing a strange voice say “I never knew you” that the iron bars had to be added for his own protection.
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Denise offers the prompt word “knot” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories.
Matthew 7:23 – “And then will I profess unto them, I never knew you: depart from me, ye that work iniquity.” (KJV)

All we can do is tell them and pray and trust the Holy Spirit to do the rest.
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May they all heed the Holy Spirit. Thank you, Mary!
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Interesting take Frank.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Ah yes, the voice of our Master. I never want to hear them. “I never knew you!”
Shalom!
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I don’t ever want to hear him say that either. Thank you, Michael!
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Knot sure what this is about, Frank, but nice imagery.
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Thank you, Doug!
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This breaks my heart. The fact is, all the oil you need, and the right clothes, are waiting to be given to you as a gift, all you have to do is realize you can’t earn it and ask, and it’s yours.
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Very good point, Mimi. He just needed to ask.
I enjoyed your story but did not know how to comment on it. The next time his son will leave some of the cigars in the tackle box.
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Free will is a gift, for some knot.
Nice 6, Frank.
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Thank you, Spira!
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Wow love the twist at the end
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I am glad you liked that. Thank you, Jim!
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I am having a hard time leaving you a like.
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WordPress 😦
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I see this is anonymous. Ladysighs here. 🙂
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Thank you, Ladysighs!
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Reloading the post page sometimes solves this issue…found that by chance when I was having the same problem.
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I sometimes have trouble as well being identified by WordPress when posting comments. Thank you for the comment!
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Interesting take, seen from the point of view of the excluded one, Frank.
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May none of us be these excluded ones. Thank you, Jenne!
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This is so intriguing, particularly with the Bible verse at the end. Thanks for your Six!
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Thank you, Astrid!
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“those crossed bars mirrored a knot of frustration in his throat”
VERY nicely composed!
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Thank you, Liz!
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An engaging tale with a fitting quote.
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Thank you, Keith!
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Dark and mysterious, Frank
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Thank you!
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well done. that is the most terrifying verse in the Bible, BTW. Great job good six.
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It is very terrifying. Thank you, Paul!
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A grim tale and interesting take on the prompt.
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Thank you!
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bit of the price of (looking) a gift horse in the mouth, no?
(Really enjoy the re-working/up-dating whatever is the correct term for your Sixes. Very cool)
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I am glad you liked this. Thank you, Clark!
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Eloquent take on the parable, Frank. He kept God waiting. Now he is, eternally.
~Dora
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Good point. We don’t want to keep God waiting. Thank you, Dora!
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You handle these challenges so well, Frank. Good job.
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Thank you, Dan!
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You handled the prompt so cleverly!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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“And then will I profess unto them, I never knew you: depart from me, ye that work iniquity.” Those are words I hope never to hear.
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Me, neither. Thank you, Mark!
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