Proverbial Fairy Tale: A Critter’s Just Deserts

Once upon a time there lived a critter, a fish out of water, whom no one could figure out. We all knew he had problems, but he didn’t think there was anything wrong with himself, at least, nothing worth the bother of fixing.

Although he reassured us that he was fine – “just following a different drummer”, he lamely explained – how could we convince him otherwise without a proper diagnosis? So, we diagnosed him ourselves yelling: YOU’RE NUTS!

That should have solved the problem, but all it did was isolate the critter further while we went off to our regular therapy sessions and he let his problems go from bad to worse. Even after all of us went to our just deserts none of us could figure out why he kept living happily ever after.

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Denise offers the prompt word “fish” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories.

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Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

27 thoughts on “Proverbial Fairy Tale: A Critter’s Just Deserts”

    1. I was not thinking of the fool in Proverbs 26:4-5. The others who tried to fix him would be closer to that fool. His following a different drummer was following the Lord and as a result of his obedience in spite of opposition, he lived happily ever after. One cannot always trust the narrator of a story. Blessings and thank you, Jim!

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  1. This made me think quite deeply Frank – it seems to me that despite society’s view of his differences and difficulties he was happy in his own skin – thanks for making my brain grind into action at 6 o’clock the morning😀🩷

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  2. yeah, a lot (well, percentage-wise) of people do not like those who are different… and they especially don’t like these different people not caring what they think

    good Six

    (liked your Reply to SlimJim about “One cannot always trust the narrator of a story.”

    as a thing in writing, the ‘Unreliable Narrator’ is, to me, one of the more fascinating elements in stories… can’t say I’m figured out how to pull it off

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