Six Sentence Story: The Cookie

People at work said there was something odd about the cafe on the ground floor of the building where our heroine rented her apartment. However, as far as she could tell, nothing seemed at all “odd” about it and the food was delicious.

Today as she entered the cafe the breakup with her boyfriend made her forget what others said about this mom-and-pop Chinese noodle shop. She ordered the same spicy noodles she always did when her mind flagged her with doubts.

After the meal she paid the bill, hesitated before opening the homemade fortune cookie, but then read its message.

The love of God for YOU is the greatest story ever told.

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Denise offers the prompt word “flag” to be used in this week’s Six Sentence Stories.

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Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

23 thoughts on “Six Sentence Story: The Cookie”

    1. This may be a one-off tale unless something comes to mind. I imagine those others who though the cafe was “odd” also received relevant fortune cookies when they ate there. Blessings, Denise!

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  1. That’s such a great story told in such a short form. Absolutely enjoy your posts.

    And the heroine seems like my type of a gal, spicy noodles and the fortune cookies… I wonder what the oddity may be, hm.

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  2. most excellent ‘sharp-angle close*’ to your Six this week

    *to step aside from the Reader’s assumptions and produce a surprise ending that, remaining consistent in the established narrative, offers a resolution made all the more effective by the unexpected conclusion

    aka good Six

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