The time labelled ‘past’ had an end
And the future we guess with a trend.
But the present is real
Like a now we can feel
That the clock tries but can’t comprehend.
Written for the Limerick Challenge Week 52: The End.
Photo: “Wiggly Trees and Mellow Lake” by the author
Nice one. Wish you a very Happy New Year.
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Thank you! Happy New Year.
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Thanks.
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The time labelled ‘past’ had an end
Its affect on future we can’t comprehend.
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The past does seem to try to keep going by affecting the future. Thanks!
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I absolutely love this one! 🙂
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Thank you, Prakash!
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Lovely limerick!
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Thank you, Kay!
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You’re welcome. 💜
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You’ve expressed a timeless truth (pun intended) so well: only the present is real and can be experienced/felt. Excellently written!
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Thank you! The clock is missing something important about time in spite of all its usefulness as a measuring device. It can’t feel or experience the present.
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Great personification of the clock.
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As usual it’s an amazing lyric. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Sorry Frank I meant limerick.
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A limerick is a kind of lyric in my mind. It has meter and rhyme and is rather short.
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Happy New Year,Sir!
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Happy New Year!
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I like the approach and your music too.
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Thanks! I tend to write using fixed forms except for prose poetry. This helps with the sound, but it can’t replace content or the message of the poem for significance.
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