Good roots avoid the sunbeams.
They much prefer the dark
Away from light and sources bright.
They love the mysteries of night.
That’s where they leave their mark.
But leaves prefer the sunlight.
That’s where they dream to toil
And offer all until the Fall
To help their Whole stand true and tall
Then rest on peaceful soil.
“The roots are also incredibly light-sensitive; but in contrast to the leaves, they don’t like light at all.” Stefano Mancuso and Alessandra Viola, Brilliant Green: The Surprising History and Science of Plant Intelligence, Island Press, translated by Joan Benham, 2015, page 50. If you think plants are vegetables, this book is worth reading.
Linked to dVerse Poetics hosted by Björn Rudberg with “soil” as the prompt.
Linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads for their Tuesday Platform imagined by Marian.
Photo: “The Details of Blooming” by the author. The scene is from the Chicago Botanic Garden.
A wonderful image that could be seen as metaphor… the way the leaf will feed its roots.. love the rhyme you have used here.
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Thank you, Björn!
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Words of wisdom.
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Thanks, Jane!
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Again, lovely rhyme scheme and rhythm, I like this one
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Thank you, Diana! I am glad you liked the rhyme and rhythm.
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Oh, I really like the meter you used in this, Frank, not to mention the wonderful poem itself. I find trees to create such create images and metaphors.
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Trees are amazing. I am glad you liked the meter, Victoria!
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Wonderful rhythmic rhyming, Frank!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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I don’t know about the meter, but I dug the message, and rolled along with the rhyme & poetic rhythm. I tend too shy away from structured rhyme, endeavoring to create rhythm within the dancing undulating stanzas, as my words dart & hop & play within the spaces on the page–hoping there will be a visual ( & often auditory) component as part of the reader’s experience.
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I’m glad you liked the message, Glenn. That is the whole point of writing anything, to communicate something. I find rhyme and meter easy. There are other ways to make words sound nice and the sound is important to keep the readers’ interest however it may be done.
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Love how you give character to the soil and leaves ~ To rest on peaceful soil is a meaningful line ~ I hope I can so do when its my time ~
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I am glad you noticed that last line, Grace. That is the main reason I wrote the poem. Thanks!
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you, Sascha!
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I love the wisdom in your verse ❤️ Beautifully penned.
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I am glad you like it, Sanaa!
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As above so below. Love the balance of both. The photo really adds to the whole.
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I am glad you liked the photo, Colleen! Walking that particular path in the Chicago Botanic Garden is one I look forward to each spring. Thank you!
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oh, to be a tree finding peace in light and darkness.
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I am amazed how trees respond to light both in looking for it in leaves and rejecting it so their roots go deep into the soil. Thanks!
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Beautiful! And wonderful way of illustrating the dichotomous nature of leaves and roots.
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Thank you! That dichotomous nature surprises me and at the same time seems obvious.
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I like the form here, 7, 6, 8, 6. Rhyme okay too but it tends to get lost on me. Would anothet stanza third tree part, the structure/framework (trunk and branches) have fit in? It would very likely meddle with contrast.
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I could have made this longer, but I was fascinated by Mancuso and Viola’s portrayal of leaves and roots which only had two parts. Apparently trees even know their own seedlings and give them space to grow underground. That would have been another topic to present.
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always love your photos of the gardens, love the rhyme telling us the behaviour of plants and roots especially, much responsibility they have those roots, thats why the hide so well.
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I am glad you like the photos, Gina! It seems obvious to me now, but I was surprised to read that roots avoid the sunlight to stay rooted in the soil.
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when I first read it the same thought struck me, like this should be something I knew right but when I did read on your post it sort of made more sense.
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This is such a gentle poem, Frank, which conveys a sense of peace, in the garden and in the soil/ soul. The roots and the leaves are different but of the same stem or tree.
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They all work together. I even found in the Mancuso and Viola book that trees even know which seedlings are their own and help those seedling grow by making room underground for them to establish their own roots. Thanks, Kim!
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This is so peaceful. I want to read it over and over again. Gorgeous photo. Love the way the trees form a canopy over the walkway.
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That path in the Chicago Botanic Garden is my favorite especially when the blooms occur this time of year. I am glad you enjoyed it, Lynn!
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It’s stunning. WordPress ate your comment on my soil poem and I don’t see a way to recover it. I’m convinced WordPress hates me.
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Sometimes WordPress seems slow for me. I give it time to sync or whatever it’s doing. I didn’t see anything from you in my spam folder. That is occasionally where things go for some reason.
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a so well-written poem with an interesting trivia. well done, Frank. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you, Rosema! I am glad you liked it.
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you’re welcome, Frank! 🙂
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I love the intelligence of plants!
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They are smarter than I realized. I also learned that 99.5% of the earth’s biomass is plant-form which sort of makes sense now that I think about it. Thanks, Rosemary!
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I agree with Bjorn. I read this a metaphor. Great take, Frank. 🙂
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Yes, it is a metaphor in the way I presented it. The leaves are like us, but all metaphors break down at some point which allows for other metaphors and their truths to share our attention. Thanks, Maria!
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I like the message of the tree–imagine it’s different parts working together, but also the metaphor.
The photo is beautiful! It made me want to walk there.
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It is a lovely walk. I am glad you liked the photo. I wish it gave a better sense of the delicate white of the blossoms, but something has to be left for the actual experience of it.
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‘Then rest on peaceful soil’ sounds so graceful. Thank you for the info about the book Frank. It sounds fascinating.
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Thanks, Janice! I am still reading the book. It is a survey of research being done with an attempt to argue that there is more to trees than we suspect.
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It’s on my reading list now. Another one is The Hidden Life of Trees.
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Very nice. I love how you brought life to the tree.
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Thank you, Eugenia! I am glad you liked it.
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So interesting, you say, there are different moods and responses in the plant, just like humans’
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Plants are closer to us than I realized. Thanks!
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I never considered these contrasts so clearly until your poetry
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I just recently found out about them myself. Thanks, Laura!
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It’s very cool how you wove a nature lesson into a nice sounding poem. You are talented.
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Thank you, Justin! I am glad you liked it.
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There is such a strong message here for we humans who also thrive in darkness and light. Yet, would destroy the peaceful soil that provides both. It reminded me of something I wrote several years ago.
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/08/24/thirteen-ways-of-looking-at-trees/
Thanks for sharing,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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We do thrive in both darkness and light. I hadn’t thought of that before. Thanks, Elizabeth!
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Ahhh… I really like this. Thoughtful, peaceful.
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Thank you, Marian!
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Trees, I love them. Life is root and leaf.
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They are amazing and pretty resilient. Thank you!
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Sounds like a good farmer’s mantra Frank. Like something as a garden accessory
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I’m basically a farm boy although today I don’t even have a garden, but plenty of house plants. Thanks, Walter!
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A peaceful and intriguing piece Frank. Much to ponder here.
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Thanks, Paul!
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Wisdom weaving the words. Nice.
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Thank you, Roslyn!
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a lovely lyric ~
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Thank you!
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Brilliant illustration of a life cycle, and that rest on peaceful soil (at the end of it all) is most comforting.
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I am glad you liked the last line, Khaya!
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I like the idea of leaves being extroverts and roots introverts. Thanks, Fred!
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Everything makes sense here and that’s becoming a rareity these days so I’m glad for it
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Thank you! I am glad it made sense.
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Frank it really did I totally understood and appreciated where you were coming from
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Fascinating! It made me think … if the left and right philosophies of capital distribution could actually work together as leaves and roots in different seasons rather than the polarised, black-or-white interpretation too prevalent nowadays.
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The leaves and roots work together altruistically. They do compete to some extent with other species which seems more like what happens with left and right philosophies. If there were a way competing groups could become cooperative then things would change. Common threats may bring competitors together to help each other.
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I do think they work together altruistically; what I had in mind was, in the personification of the two, the leaves might claim they are the generators of “wealth” while the roots believe they are the foundation of “society” whose sweat and toiling provide the labour for the “system”. In some “systems”, the evergreen, they don’t expect return from the “capitalists” or “elites” any more than a “tax” of glucose; but in many other, in some way or another, those “systems” expect at least some seasonal or partial redistribution of capital. Sorry if I took the random thought too far!
On your thought about relationship between trees, perhaps part of what we thought of as competition among trees may actually be cooperation. I find this TEDTalk a wonderful science lesson on how trees talk and work with each other. If you have the time, I highly recommend it! 🙂
Suzanne Simard: How trees talk to each other
https://go.ted.com/Cyk3
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Yes, I’ve seen Suzanne Simard’s TED talk. I suspect there is a lot more cooperation than we can imagine. I heard about Mancuso and Viola’s book, “Brilliant Green”, from a HeartMath webinar recently that also referred to Simard’s work. The HeartMath institute ultimately wants to set up a global network of connectors between computers people own and the trees around them which I think is a promising idea. However, I’m a little disappointed with “Brilliant Green”. I was looking for more research findings and less polemic in favor of plants. I already agree with them that plants are intelligent.
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This is one of my favorites! This is just perfect and that photo is so beautiful! Happy to see you linking with the Toads, Frank!
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I’m glad you liked it, Bekkie! That scene in the Botanic Garden is one of my favorites in the spring. The blooms are breathtaking. If I see an open link day on Toads or Poets United, I’ll try to link to all those places.
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I’m still trying to get back into the swing of writing and reading. It’s easy to write and share, but when I don’t get a chance to read the others I feel so bad. And I should! Taking time off always makes my readership go down but it only makes sense. Lately I’ve been so preoccupied and I can’t put my finger on it. I ride my bike, sure, but all of a sudden the week is gone. Perhaps I’m just slowing down. Here it is Tuesday again and I’ve not done much. You are always one of the first ones to read and write. How do you do it? Have a great week!
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The week goes by pretty fast for me as well although I do feel reasonably busy. It is good to read other people’s poetry, but I think you have a book you are working on. That should be a priority. I only respond to a few of the poems that are available in the reader or my email.
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I loved this one . Deep.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
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Reblogged this on Collecting Reality and commented:
Another Biology poem for the collection:
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I loved this one .
On your thought about human relationship between trees, perhaps role of what we thought of as competitor among trees may actually be cooperation.
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I think cooperation may be the dominant activity and competition merely cooperation supporting a different group than the one we think should be supported.
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