View From the Top

Coming up from stress for air,
Breathing deeply standing there,
Wond’ring if I understood–
Yes! I did. It all was good.

Text: Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar.  I am hosting today featuring the tanaga form.  This form has four-line stanzas with seven syllables per line. It also permits varied rhyme patterns.  For the challenge the only requirement is to construct a poem inspired by the tanaga form. It need not be an actual tanaga.

Photos: “View from the Top”, above, and “Deep Red Trail”, below.

Deep Red Trail

Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone.

68 thoughts on “Breath”

      1. Yes, I thought it looked like the red paths you will find in a narrow band all along the Front Range, or the geological “fountain formation.” The Garden of the Gods is one place you will see this. I live about an hour and a half south of there:)

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