Constraints from sinning turn their screws in me.
I sleep to see fresh dreams of a new birth
Where everything I do was meant to be
And not to amplify my own self-worth.
If ever there’s a heaven for this earth,
And even if I’m not permitted in,
May praise be given for forgiven sin.
Text: Linked to dVerse Poetics where Amaya presents the theme of the seven deadly sins (and corresponding virtues). It is also a septet, a seven line poem, which I will be featuring again on Thursday for Meeting the Bar. All of these sevens are here because this week we are celebrating dVerse’s seventh anniversary.
Because of the theme of forgiveness at the end I am also linking this to Debbie Roth’s Forgiving Fridays. Her blog reminds me of the power of forgiveness. Without her influence that last line may well have been different.
Photos: “Heavenly Green Touched by Red”, above, and “Two Ants Many Flowers”, below.
A thought provoking, well written piece.
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Thank you, Magarisa!
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Beautiful Frank. Sleeping to see the future beauty, finding forgiveness, and accepting it all with a humble heart!
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Yes, that’s it. Thank you, Dwight!
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What shines here, Frank, is your humility. Humility & pride are in a tug-of-war within me.
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Best wishes, Glenn. Win that tug-of-war. Thank you!
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I love that last line!
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I’m glad. Thank you, Jo!
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Always a challenge not to amplify one’s worth ~ I specially admire the grace in the closing line: May praise be given for forgiven sin.
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I am glad you liked that line. It was the hardest one to get right. Thank you, Grace!
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I enjoyed this and you have a wonderful speaking voice. There is defiantly power in forgiveness, one that I try to practice but I know from experience that I tend to hold on to hurt longer than I should.
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I am glad you liked the audio as well. Thank you, Carol!
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I so appreciate this! 🙂 Blessings. ~Debbie
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I love the first line in this. Constraints from sinning turning their screws in me… Sin is universal! Well written.
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It is universal. Thank you, Mary!
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This has a beautiful rhythm. We all, being mortals, need forgiveness. (K)
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We all do. Thank you, Kerfe!
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this is truly a “spiritual” – an admission of “wrongs” and forgiveness (I personally don’t like to use the words “sin” in references that are personal, as such) – it’s about learning and relearning one’s humanness, daily – and rising to the challenges again and again … all delivered in a very frank, yet humble voice – really wonderful message here Frank!
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Thank you, Pat! It is about learning and relearning as you mentioned.
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Sleeping with a clear conscience, Frank, when all is forgiven.
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It is good to have a clear conscience. Thank you, Kim!
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You know, to sin, is an archery term, meaning to miss the mark. Enjoyed your write.
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Good point about sin meaning to miss the target in archery. It fits. Thank you, Annell!
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Forgiveness is my favorite subject, how it can literally transform one’s cells and make one reborn. You have written a beautiful poem here, Frank.
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Thank you, Amaya! Forgiveness is transformative.
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A lovely spiritual write Frank. Wonderful.
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Thank you, Linda!
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This brought a small little peaceful tear. Begins with visceral pain of turning screws, and ends with hopeful praise. What a wonderful shining gem of poem! 💎
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Thank you, Lona! I like to resolve the problems raised poems, if I can.
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I am proud of you, too, Fred! Thank you!
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Thanks!
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I’m accustomed to the melodic, even vibe of your words, and this is a good example of that, but I was also deeply moved by the content. There’s always a depth to your messages, but this one really hits me in the feels. I guess in my own way, I’m also seeking some form of atonement.
Nicely done, my friend. 🙂
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Thank you, Barry! I think we all are seeking atonement.
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Frank, I am so honored that this line is in your poem. Forgiving is such a blessing, and I see that through your work. My spiritual teacher John-Roger says that sin is just missing the mark. I love that definition, there’s a gentle neutrality and openness about it.
I’ll share this in #ForgivingFridays this week. Have a beautiful weekend, Frank! Great post. ~Debbie
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This poem is very moving, Frank.
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I am glad it moved you. Thank you, Robbie!
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