Some signs predicted mountains soon would crash
And we would, too, like stones dropped in the deep
Where doubt takes over truth in dreamy sleep
And counting doesn’t compensate lost cash.
Those signs suggested treasured stores held trash
Since death consumes what excess we might keep.
But who needs more? The miser, too, will weep
When life moves on for both the wise and rash.
By what we take for granted we are led
And what we give makes rich the giving hand.
The blessings she proclaimed link me to you.
I don’t remember much of what she said.
Her words I doubt I'd ever understand.
Her voice though sounded kind. May it come true.
Linked to dVerse Poetics. Sarah is hosting the the theme of harbinger.

Eloquently expressed!
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Thank you, Magarisa!
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That last line is beautiful and simple. It made me tingle. Lovely poem, Frank.
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Thank you, Sarah! And thank you for the prompt.
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What a great topic for a sonnet, maybe we don’t need to understand it all, just be careful and save the things we have been given…
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I don’t understand it all. Thank you, Bjorn!
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I’m intrigued by the ‘she’—who is ‘she’?
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I wasn’t quite sure either.
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Frank being mysterious?
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That could be it. Thank you, Jane!
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Perhaps an unexpected source?
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I was originally thinking the crow in the picture was female, but now I think it is just an unexpected authority bringing news I may or may not really want to hear. Basically, I don’t know who she is. Thank you, Jane!
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It’s true the crow in Irish mythology is female.
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I also wasn’t quite sure of who she was, but I like the sentiment, and lovely last lines.
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Thank you, Merril! I wasn’t sure either.
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🙂
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The miser too will weep.
I’m reminded of the adage, “You can’t take it with you.”
Enjoyed this write, Frank!
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Thank you, Lillian!
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I love the rise of the mysterious She in the second stanza; a prophetess or succubus–it matters not, for now her siren’s song is stuck in our head too.
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Hopefully her advice is for the best. Thank you, Glenn!
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I love this part: “I don’t remember much of what she said.
Her words I doubt I’d ever understand.
Her voice though sounded kind. May it come true.”
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Thank you!
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You are welcome, Frank.
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Although I don’t understand the “she” either Frank – it doesn’t detract from the wonderful rhythm of your sonnet.
Sometimes “she’s” have wisdom… as does “he’s”
Anna :o]
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The “she” is a bit mysterious for me as well, perhaps not the expected authority. Thank you!
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It’s all perspective, isn’t it? Choose who you listen to, is what I take away.
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Thank you, V.J.!
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Welcome
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Love that last line! I just exhaled a sigh as I read it. A really lovely piece, Frank 🙂
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Thank you, Jade!
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The miser too shall weep.. perfection. Nice write frank!
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Thank you, Violet!
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Since death consumes what excess we might keep.
But who needs more? The miser, too, will weep
When life moves on for both the wise and rash.
I’m especially sentimental about these lines after my sister’s rush passing. So thankful to be there saying good-bye to her. https://theshowersofblessings.com/2019/01/29/january-24-flash-fiction-challenge-shes-made-whole-again/
Great write, Frank.
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Best wishes, Miriam. I am sorry for the loss of your sister.
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Thank you for your kind wishes, Frank.
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I’m reminded of Lady Luck here, but I know it’s more than that. Making frugal choices and not carrying extra baggage or riches around makes our load lighter….material things, that is.
Nice opening lines.
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It could be Lady Luck. Thank you, Kathy!
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Her words I doubt I’d ever understand.
Her voice though sounded kind. May it come true.
You spell out HOPE in these two lines. Hauntingly beautiful!
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Thank you, Reena!
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Love that last line too. A very thoughtful poem Frank. Very nicely done.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat!
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Very engaging write Frank…
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Thank you, Rob!
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The evenhanded opacity keeps dreaming close to death and the oracle a woman’s voice, maybe a memory, certainly a myth. Pluto–the dark realm down under– too is where the riches are vaulted. Well crafted sonnet.
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Thank you, Brendan!
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like how you say that life moves on for no matter who
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It does. Thank you, Gina!
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You have a way with crows Frank. Image and words. (K)
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I have started seeing a lot of them recently. Thank you, Kerfe!
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They are definitely trying to tell you something.
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One day I might understand, hopefully not before it is too late. Thank you!
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My Sister would always be Able to Forecast the
Death of Loved ones for she would See their Face
In the Clouds the Week Before and when i saw the
Shape of a Cat in the Flames of the Fountain at the
Dance Hall i attend
i felt that
Harbinger
of Cosmic
Respect and
Death for Yellow
Boy would Sadly
come Soon as it did..
hmm.. When my Mother
Died from the Advanced Breast
Cancer we spotted Eerie Mammary
Clouds in the Sky the Week Before and
then in the Hospital in Her Death Bed
waiting for Her 8 Days without Food or
Water to Be Over both my Sister and i
Spotted Her Face in the Clouds in the
Most Sublime experience of my Life
Where Death met Angel Lights in the Sky
i Believe that all of Life is God Consciousness
And Life is more Like a Movie We Co-Create With
God than any Random Soup of Life as the more i Flow
in Art in Mind and Body Balance the more Life becomes
the Most Interesting Movie ever i play a part in and Direct too
as only
Co-Creating
of Course as i
Believe we all
Do in Holy and
Sacred Meaning
And Purpose of Life
When We finally come to
See the Art and Magic of Life Real..:)
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It is amazing that you were able to see these signs in the clouds and that may be seeing everything with a sacred meaning. Seeing it real. Thank you, Fred!
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Ink Blot Test Life
No painted NumBers
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