Roses are red
With all we’ve been through
Those many long decades
Are roses on you
Roses grew red
Violets turned blue
Fresh dreams with springtime
Still blossom from you
Roses are red
Ocean’s green hue
Shines with those seagulls
Who wander by you
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Winter has happened
And snow’s falling too
Roses are red
Cards slip like new
That ace up my sleeve
Turned into a two
Roses are red
Violets are blue
The last of my roses
I'm giving to you
Linked to dVerse Open Link Night. Grace is hosting. Happy Thanksgiving to all!

A poem , Walking, with an accompanying photograph of mine were published yesterday in Ancient Paths Literary Magazine. I am grateful to the editor Skylar Hamilton Burris for accepting it.
I love how you used the well known “roses are red… ” repeated with all those variations building layers of metaphor… well done
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Wonderful photo, poem and awesome note about the publication. Congrats! Thanks for being part of our team Frank!
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Thank you, Grace!
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Very interesting and clever tribute ballad to one of the most quoted verse line there is; liked your last stanza best.
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Thank you, Glenn! The last stanza was the most important one.
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Congratulations with your publication Frank and I love these last two lines ‘The last of my roses
I’m giving to you’
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Thank you, Xenia! I am glad those last two lines stood out.
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Happy Thanksgiving Frank to you and yours.
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Happy Thanksgiving, Peter!
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This is beautiful! ❤️ Especially love; “Roses are red/Cards slip like new/That ace up my sleeve/Turned into a two.” Happy Thanksgiving 🙂
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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This is so sweet. ❤
Who could need more than exactly this?
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Thank you, Callie!
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Congrats Frank and bravo for taking ‘roses are red’ through such permutations – I especially like
“Roses are red
Ocean’s green hue
Shines with those seagulls
Who wander by you”
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Thank you, Laura!
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Good one Frank
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Thank you!
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What a sweet roses are red… poem! Still bringing her roses… you are a good man!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Two lovely poems, Frank. Congratulations on getting published.
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Thank you, Jade!
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You are very welcome.
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Wonderful poem 👍
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Thank you, Srikanth!
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Many congratulations on the publication of your poem and photograph, Frank! I like the way you have played with the old rhyme in this poem and turned it into a gentle, more personal love poem. I love the final stanza.
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Thank you, Kim!
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Complex ‘red flag’ poem, packed with dangerous imagery yet alluding to love. hmmmmm
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Thank you, Sabio! Good point about the dangerous imagery.
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The “roses are red” refrain is well played to show a long term well aged romance.
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Thank you!
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Congratulations on the publication.
This is a clever use of the repeating lines!
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Thank you, Pratibha!
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Sweet and simple. You’ve taken what could’ve been a cliche and made it a vulnerable declaration/reaffirmation of love. I love it. 🙂
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Thank you, Barry!
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SMiLes A Clear
Path And
Destination
For Ever Coloring
Roses of Love With
Thorns and Flowers
Holding Hands is surely
A Nice Place of Peace And Harmony
to Live as Petals Spread over Life’s Joy in Comfort of Love..:)
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Thank you, Fred!
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🎶🎵😁
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Beautiful..
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Thank you!
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