Mirror, mirror, mocking, merry, How your scars are growing scary. Winter’s wonders want to tarry, Tucking tight with white the prairie.
Linked to dVerse Meeting the Bar. Bjorn is hosting with the theme of alliteration.
Alliteration
43 thoughts on “Alliteration”
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Poetry, Short Prose and Walking 
this reads like a little weather warning, the first line is delicious to say, like lines to a favourite new song.
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It could be a weather warning. Thank you, Gina!
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I agree with Gina. Does sound like a weather warning. Good response to this prompt.
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Thank you, Maria!
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I am waiting for winter’s wonders to wander away. Nice poem Frank!
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May spring come. Thank you, Mary!
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the photo with the frozen drops at the ends of the leaves certainly classifies as winter wonder. i like the nursery rhyme beat to this, Frank.
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Thank you, Jade!
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You are welcome.
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There you go again, Frank. Brief, succinct, and perfect!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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Well done Frank!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Every step of Life a Dance
Every word of Life a Song
Funny what You find When
Heaven is the Dream and
You And God are Real Now..:)
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Good observation about reality. Thank you, Fred!
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ReaLiTy
Best when
LoVELiT Colors New..:)
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You have captured the spirit of winter, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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a scarred mirror makes me think of so much more.
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Thank you, Reena! I am glad you liked that line.
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“Tucking tight with white the prairie” how beautiful is this line. 🙂
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Thank you!
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Very lovely indeed. For what it’s worth, I think writing a short verse that captures the scene is as hard as writing a short story that has it all inside.
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Thank you, Daniel!
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This must have been hard to do…packing good rhyme, meaning and feeling into a short ditty. But you did it! Love it 🙂
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Thank you, Vivian!
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😊
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Look at those pictures! Perfect words for snow covered flora!
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Thank you!
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kaykuala
Short and sweet. It entails prior thinking to accomplish and you did it very well Frank!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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What gorgeous photos! And you are so adept at creating an entire world with just a few lines. “Winter’s wonders want to tarry,
Tucking tight with white the prairie” is pure magic.
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Thank you, Victoria!
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Love how you combined the alliterative beat with the rhymes…
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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You clinched it for me with the wonderful last line!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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Great alliteration and nursery rhyme!
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Thank you!
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I didn’t know where to go with this challenge. Like what you did with it:)
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I wasn’t sure either. Thank you!
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very nice post
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Thank you!
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