Though not the sort of Gods that I Would bother to believe in, They raise their silence to the sky Rejecting useless reasons why Without pretending they can fly Point edges up uneven. From a distance they look small And red against the range. They shock me. What was once so tall Stands dwarfed as nothing much at all. What rose majestic seemed to fall Where wind and rain bring change. Mountain heights may help me see. Foothills praise more modestly.
Liked to dVerse Poetics where Lillian is hosting with the theme of describing a place we can travel to in our minds during in this lockdown.
The top photo I took from within this beautiful and well-maintained park. I took the bottom photo at Palmer Park a few miles away. At the top of the photo just right, off-center, below the mountain range are these unusual rock formations called the Garden of the Gods.

I love these images, Frank. And your words in terms of the changes wind and rain brings to landscape over thousands of years….these have been shaped…misshaped…chiseled down in size by nature’s own hand. I love the color of these…that red terracotta color.
Have you ever been to Bryce Canyon? It has what are called hoodoos….and these also have strange and almost mythical shapes wrought by the forces of nature over thousands of years. Like this place for you, Bryce is one of my favorite places and oh how I would love to go back there. For me….they almost seem like lonely spirits standing there.
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I have heard of the hoodoos. I would like to see them someday. Thank you for the prompt today, Lillian!
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I have never been there… I have spent a fair amount of time in other parts of colorado… but never came close to this… looks like a great place to walk
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It is a great place to walk. Many trails and a whole mountain to climb. Thank you, Glenn!
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Reading your poem aloud, the sound is melodious. Your conclusion ties up the rest of the poem nicely. Why did I think that AZ was the only place with these red rocks? There is something comforting about the color. As dry as it looks, it’s weird to think of water slowly eroding them…
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They must be all over that part of the country. I used to work for a while around Phoenix, AZ, and I sort of know the area, but I never did much sightseeing when I was there. Mostly just work. Thank you, Jade!
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I really like the rhyme scheme and the vibrant photos!
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Thank you, Jenna!
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The rock formations here and in others of our state parks leave one breathless and aware of the eons it must have taken to hone and polish these rocks. I’ve been to the Garden of the Gods. Thank you for taking me there again!
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I glad it brought back memories. Thank you, Beverly!
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Excellent piece, Frank, I’ve been there, and it is a heavenly view. Bryce Canyon and Zion in Utah are great, but Arches National Park outside of Moab is my favorite.
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I haven’t been to the Arches National Park, but I would like to get there some day. Thank you, Glenn!
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It does look otherworldly. (K)
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It is a marvelous area. Thank you, Kerfe!
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lovely images painted in words and photo … places can seem much smaller than what we remember from childhood.
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Thank you, Kate!
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What an eloquent poem, Frank. And your photo is gorgeous. Thank you for the virtual visit! ❤
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Thank you, Jan!
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Wow – that’s amazing – the contrast of red and green. The rhyme scheme is excellent.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Nicely done, Frank. I’ve been there twice, just for corporate event mini-hikes, but it’s breathtaking.
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It is breathtaking. Thank you, Dan!
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Beatuiful Frank! The natural formations are so beautiful especially against the broader landscape!
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Thank you, Dwight! It is good to see them from a distance as well.
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i Once Read A Study That in Flat Lands
Humans more Often See God As Human
As There is Nothing Much Bigger To See..
Hmm.. the
Size of
Within
Even
Science
Has/Is No
Way to Measure..:)
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Good point about flat lands compared with mountains. The perspective on God may differ.
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No Mountains
For me.. Hehe
Afraid of Heights..;)
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I really enjoyed the idea behind this poem, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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Amazing photo
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