I woke up to a risen sun And clouds consumed with gray. I take a pen and start to write. In spite of charms from morning light I haven’t much to say. I often blame this on my brain. Why pace so, to and fro? Impatiently I start to stress. Persistence generates a mess Then drains. I watch it go. Another stanza? Oh, why not? I have a lot of time. I scribble some and cross that out Then doubt what it was all about. At least I still can rhyme.
Linked to dVerse Open Link Night. Grace is hosting.

I noticed from Kim M. Russell’s post that we each have poems in Visual Verse this month. My submission is Birds, Cats and Dogs. A poem by Jane Dougherty is also there. Visual Verse sends an email with an illustration at the beginning of the month. Poets are limited to 50-500 words and one hour to complete a poem. At the top of the page is a “Newsletter” link that you can use to get on their email list.
This is an amusing look at something I think we have all experienced. Sometimes the real meaning is hard to capture.
Great rhyming and use of rhyme scheme, Frank.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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The photos and your poem match well. I can see what some think of that hideous barrier 🙂
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It is falling apart. Thank you, Jade!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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wow wonderful
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Thank you!
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Poignant!
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Yes. Enticing while withholding – much like a muse who show her face.
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the muse who fails to show her face!
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She doesn’t show. Thank you, Ken!
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Thank you, Ken!
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Hitting that dry spell, that word wall, is common to most of us. I like your light-hearted perspective on these moments.
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Sometimes I haven’t anything to say. Thank you, Glenn!
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I absolutely love this rollicking good rhyming fun, Frank. So true!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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I think sometimes you just have to follow the rhymes… just like the sea has its waves.
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Sometimes that is all I can think of. Thank you, Bjorn!
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I swear my pupils dilate in anticipation of the delight in your rhyming whenever I open this page.
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Thank you, Xan!
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it’s exceptional rhyming and a humorous take on hitting the barrier, very poetic!
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Thank you, Kate!
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You always make me smile Frank. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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You always do rhyme Frank! What a beautiful perspective of the day – I am envious!
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Thank you, Grace!
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Your describe it well… when inspiration lags! I use photos! Congratulations on being published!
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Your describe it well… when inspiration lags! I use photos! Congratulations on being published!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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kaykuala
Then doubt what it was all about.
At least I still can rhyme.
Persistence will certainly leave its mark
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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It matters not what its about
your poems always make me shout
Hurrah!
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Thank you, Peter!
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it’s……..oops.
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This is so charming, Frank. I also wrote in rhyme, a bit of fluff.
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It is fun to use rhyme. Thank you, Helen!
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I like the authenticity in this and your sharing of process. The first stanza is my favorite part. Well done.
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Thank you, Ali!
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Perfect. I like to fall back on rhyming too and write about writing when I can’t write!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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I adore your use of rhyme and the tongue planted firmly in cheek feel of this. I had have pen in hand and “Oh why not?” in brain, many, many times.
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Thank you, Raivenne!
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I think we all have days like this, Frank. It doesn’t always work to try and push through it.
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We do. Thank you, Robbie!
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TiME A RhYmE
WhY ME NoW Sees
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Thank you, Fred!
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Hope
Your Weekend
Is Nice Frank😁🎶
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