Jeremy stepped inside. In his ear he heard, “Stay near the door. Don’t respond to anything they say.”
“Look. That guy’s back.”
“OK, let’s finish this. You’re going to get what’s coming to you. You hear me? No one will care how loud you scream in this place.”
The five men stepped out of the safety of the shadows moving toward Jeremy. When they were visible in the middle of the room, shots shattered the windows.
Jeremy heard a gunfight outside. His earphone went silent. He wondered what happened. Was it safe to leave?
He left the room anyway.
Linked to Carrot Ranch July 16 Flash Fiction Challenge to write a 99-word story with the theme “scream inside your heart”.

And headed in the other direction I hope! (K)
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I hope he was also. Thank you, Kerfe!
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Well, that’s an exciting 99 words, Frank! Takes some nerve to be the bait.
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Thank you, Charli!
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Birds of Different
FLoWeRS SinGinG
Colors Together
Without Toting
Guns As Beauty
Is Wisdom’s Best Love
HeHe.. i ReMeMBeR DaNCinG
One Night In Heat of the Moment
As Bars BreatHE A Dude Ran Into
Me We Stood
Silent
His
Girl FRiEnD
Suddenly Hugged
Me TiGHT And Broke the Silence
With Beauty’s Breath Feeling Without Bleeding
There was another Night When A Drunk Dude kept
Trying to Push Me Around Girls Surrounding me
And A Group 5 Truly Large Samoan Looking
Women Corralled Him Far Away
from me And We Finished
Our Dance
Just
FRiEnDS
iN HiGHeR PlaceS Haha..
i’ve Got Photos oF iT BuT all
The Digging to Find them Hehe..:)
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I like how they protected you from the drunk.
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Women Win As
They Cooperate
More Than Compete
However
Digital
Life is Changing
This Balance Required
For Species Thriving
Significantly
Easy to
See in
The Suicide
Rates among
Females in the
Newest Generations…
Now We MUST Wear Masks
To Save Our Health
But to suggest
There is no
Harm to
Human Health
By Top Health
Officials By
Humans Losing
Face to Face
Communication
That 412 Mapped
Emotional Expressions
We Humans Experience
Face to Face
For Emotional
Health is Short
Sighted at
Least as
Humans are
Evolved to Communicate
By Dancing Facial
Expressions
Most
For
Soul Health
As that relates
To really living
At All but True
There is imagination
And Colors of Words
In Metaphor too
The origin
Of much
Of Poetry
Comes From
Humans Who
Have lost
The
Face
Of Their
Souls as i
Surely Did for
66 Months of
Numb Soul Face
Pain Birthing
All
The
Facial
Expressions
Of these Words…
i expect Art Will
Thrive in the
Coming
Year
To
Replace
Human Soul Faces
Perhaps someone
Else will even
Dance
In Public
If this New Mask
World lasts long
Enough… Avatar
Life online
Now Surely
A Saving
Soul Face Grace 🙏
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That was tense!
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Thank you!
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