His knuckles tapped the door to knock.
Would no one on the inside hear?
But then came Jane, who wiped a tear,
and Jim, a target safe to mock.
They looked outside, released the lock,
and called the others, “Come and see!”
But none would bother. Faithfully
both Jim and Jane dressed in pure white,
gave thanks like it were Christmas night,
and shared a meal among just three.
Linked to Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge where the goal is to use the rhyme word “knock” in the A line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC.
I imagine Jim and Jane as those rare members of the church in Laodicea, as recorded in Revelation 3:20, who were willing to open the door.
Crystal Grimes is hosting a Holiday Blogging Party to which I am linking this post.
Beautiful poem. Today my reading plan finished Joel and began Revelation.
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Thank you, Jael! I have recently read Revelation, and the Laodicean church keeps coming to mind.
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I get excited when I read that the Lord is returning Soon 🙂 I’m so ready…we don’t even need to pack a toothbrush 🙂
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I am ready also. Thank you, Jael!
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“Soon and very soon…” the song comes to mind 🙂
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There an innocence here I really like 💜
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Thank you, Willow! I do imagine Jim and Jane were innocent perhaps like children which is why they went to open the door.
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Indeed 😌
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Very nice work, Frank. Quite appropriate for the season, too.
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Thank you, Dan!
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The true essence of the festival 🙂
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Thank you, Nima!
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Welcome Frank !! 🙂
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Overlooking the lagoon is a stunning photo, Frank.
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Thank you!
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