So whom do you rely upon?
You’re at the Red Sea. Where’s the boat?
How long in water can you float?
That’s when a way was made. At dawn
the charging enemy was gone
except for corpses flushed to shore.
You still have doubts? You’d like one more
experiment to test what’s true?
You see the dead? They’d like that, too,
but they have lost their strength for war.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “float” to be used in a B line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s Décima Poetry Challenge.
See Exodus 14 for an account of the crossing of the Red Sea.


Wonderful poem..🙏🏻
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Thank you, Athira!
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Most welcome Frank
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Nicely done.
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Thank you, Arthur!
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We had better depend upon the One who is dependable. Never changing. That is not man or machine.
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Good point! He’s the One we need to rely upon. Thank you, Oneta!
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Oh my gosh, this poem blew me totally away, Frank–5-Star Excellence!!
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I am glad you liked this, Jael! Thank you!
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You’re most welcome.
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PS–I forgot to ask what kind of flowers these are, they’re so beautiful.
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I have no idea what those flowers are. Sometimes people give me a name but often I forget what it was.
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Okay 🙂
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This is so poignant, Frank. Well done.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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This is awesome! The middle of the poem flows especially well.
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Thank you, Jenna!
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Like Peter, we’d better keep our eyes on Jesus when we step out of the boat. Excellent poem, Frank.
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Good point. We need to keep our eyes on Jesus.
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