Although Martha was shocked when she heard that Brian died after being hit by a bus, his death saved her from having to explain to him her involvement with George should he ever find out which he wouldn’t now. To her credit, she thought, she had indeed warned Brian many times that he had better get his act together if he wanted to keep her. Besides, she reasoned, George was a serious artist with highly acclaimed paintings of mystically wise dragons and seductive faeries grossing over five figures while Brian by comparison was what exactly?
Martha forgot about Brian until she and George passed the center of the art district and she saw him – Brian! – supposedly dead, but now, bringing a tray of food to guests at a patio table, alive and well, working where he always did. Brian saw her, too, and went back inside.
Later, moving with George through the gallery that displayed his art, a chill came over Martha as she stared deeply into the hate-enflamed eyes on painting after painting and wondered how she could have been so wrong about those dragons.
Denise offers the prompt word “center” for this week’s Six Sentence Stories. This story continues from Bowl – Six Sentence Stories. Next: Shift – Six Sentence Stories


Ah well. The art of deception. Well done!
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There is much deception here. Thank you, Michael!
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This got so very interesting!
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Thank you, Pragalbha. I am glad it kept your interest.
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Ahh, very interesting twist!
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Thank you, Dyanne!
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Hmmm, will she now find herself alone? Maybe she needs to clear her vision before she tries to be in a relationship.
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She does need to clear her vision, but she is beginning to see the problem. Thank you Mimi!
I liked your story of the marriage relationship especially how they shared the brownies. I don’t know how to post a comment on your blog, so I am posting it here.
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Material wealth, fame and money does not always make a good person. Could Martha have been staring into her own guilt, as reflected in the dragons’ eyes? Multiple layers here, Frank.
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Good point. I hadn’t thought of it being Martha’s own guilt, but that might be worth developing next week. Thank you, Denise!
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Excellent piece, Frank. Well done.
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Thank you, Doug!
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What an interesting turn!
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Thank you, Laura!
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Have to admit I’m a bit confused about the death and Life of Brian.
But I like ‘hate-enflamed eyes’.
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Brian got some sense knocked into him. That’s all I know about his being hit by the bus and surviving. I am glad you liked those dragon eyes. Thank you!
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Intriguing – all sorts to play with in next week’s instalment! 😉
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There may be another installment next week. Thank you, Laura!
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So, the grass isn’t greener on the other side; but what of revenge? Great Six, Frank! I hope there’ll be more.
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Thank you, Chris! I hope there will be more as well.
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really good…and sneaky
good six.
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Thank you!
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Woah! Full of intrigue with an excellent finale!
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Thank you, Eugenia!
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My pleasure, Frank!
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Oh my! Such a good six! You made my skin crawl.
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Thank you, Susan! I am glad you liked it!
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YOu capture so much human nature in these short stories! She must be shocked, and her husband must have known a lot more than she realized!
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They both had problems. I am going to have to bring Brian back into her life somehow. Thank you, Jim!
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Very good twist
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dude! well expressed insight into what we here might express as ‘the secret of the universe’
actually two-part secret: perception and perspective, what is encapsulated in the advice to know ‘how you relate yourself to the world around’. (This means to account for yourself first before deciding how to relate to others).
Good Six
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Thank you, Clark! Martha is beginning to realize she doesn’t see all those secrets clearly.
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Surprise!!!
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She was surprised. Thank you, Mark!
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A great little tale with a brilliant sixth sentence! Nice one Frank.
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Thank you, Keith!
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Is she sure it’s him? Maybe it’s his clone . . . or maybe I’ve been watching too much of Orphan Black on Amazon Prime.
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As I saw it Brian came back to life after dying, but he did not have a near death experience because he didn’t recall anything while dead. People do this, or at least they get declared dead and then start breathing again. I am hoping to reunite Brian and Martha later, but I don’t know how this will all play out. My ultimate goal is to describe the occult that both Brian and Martha participated in to some extent. I will have to think about those clones. Thanks for bringing them up, Joyce!
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That took quite a turn. Excellent and creepy stuff, Frank!
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Thank you!
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Twisted!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Interesting. very well done.
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Thank you, Indira!
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