Delusion masks the sense of it.
Deceptive dreaming wastes my time.
From out of this I’d love to climb,
this dark, demonic, dragon pit.
Against the wall in mud I sit.
I see a makeshift rope appear
and from above the voice I hear
is telling me to grasp it tight.
There was no way, but now there’s light.
Death grabbed my feet, but mercy’s near.
Ronovan Hester offers the rhyme word “time” to be used in a B-line of a décima having rhyme pattern ABBAACCDDC for this week’s challenge. I was thinking of Jeremiah 38 about Jeremiah being rescued from the dungeon of Malchiah when describing the rescue from this dragon pit.


The rope, my rosary!
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I like your association of the rope in the story with a rosary. Thank you, Myrna!
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Amen! Mercy is near. Mercy is ours.
Blessings.
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Yes, mercy is near. Thank you, Michael!
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Wow I love this beautiful poem of hope and faith. Speaks to me of so many life instances. The photo is gorgeous!
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I am glad you liked the photo and poem, Pragalbha. Thank you!
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Frank,
What a beautiful view of the lake! And how grand that mercy drags us out of the dragon’s pit! Hallelujah!
pax,
dora
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I am glad you liked the photo, Dora. Yes, mercy frees us from the pit.
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“Deceptive dreaming wastes my time” I have been really pondering lately what dreaming or actives am I being deceived by and what areas am I lacking self discipline. Praising God with you for His mercy!
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Praise God! His mercy is good! I have been deceived by many things. May the Lord show me what they are today and lead us all on the path to righteousness. Thank you, Mandy!
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Good poem inspired by Jeremiah 38!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome brother Frank
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This is a beautiful poem, Frank.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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