Colorful

In the morning the sun turns up bright
Through the noon opened eyes feel delight.
As the colors caress
To enchant and to bless
They will merge with the star-calming night.

Written for the Limerick Challenge Week 22: Color.

Author: Frank Hubeny

I enjoy walking, poetry and short prose as well as taking pictures with my phone. View all posts by Frank Hubeny

13 thoughts on “Colorful”

draliman says:

May 29, 2016 at 1:18 am

Very good! You squeezed a lot in – morning to night – and still managed to keep to the limerick format.

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frankhubeny says:

May 29, 2016 at 6:43 pm

Thanks, draliman!

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Al Lane says:

May 30, 2016 at 2:33 pm

Really liked this, especially “star-calming night” 🙂

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1. frankhubeny says:
  
  June 5, 2016 at 5:29 pm
  
  Thanks, Al Lane!
  
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ranu802 says:

June 2, 2016 at 6:11 am

I like your limerick. 🙂

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1. frankhubeny says:
  
  June 5, 2016 at 5:30 pm
  
  Thank you, ranu802!
  
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Nicola Auckland says:

June 2, 2016 at 2:59 pm

Beautiful, my favourite this week I think.

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1. frankhubeny says:
  
  June 5, 2016 at 5:30 pm
  
  Thank you, Nicola!
  
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MindandLifeMatters says:

June 3, 2016 at 11:59 am

I had the image of twilight in my mind by the time I finished reading that limerick! Very well done! I love it! 🙂

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1. frankhubeny says:
  
  June 5, 2016 at 5:31 pm
  
  Thank you, Mind and Life Matters! I’m glad you liked it!
  
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Hélène Vaillant says:

August 9, 2016 at 8:47 pm

I loved the “gentle” sense of this poem.

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1. frankhubeny says:
  
  August 9, 2016 at 9:12 pm
  
  Thank you, Hélène Vaillant. Best wishes.
  
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