In the morning the sun turns up bright
Through the noon opened eyes feel delight.
As the colors caress
To enchant and to bless
They will merge with the star-calming night.
Written for the Limerick Challenge Week 22: Color.
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Very good! You squeezed a lot in – morning to night – and still managed to keep to the limerick format.
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Thanks, draliman!
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Really liked this, especially “star-calming night” 🙂
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Thanks, Al Lane!
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I like your limerick. 🙂
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Thank you, ranu802!
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Beautiful, my favourite this week I think.
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Thank you, Nicola!
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I had the image of twilight in my mind by the time I finished reading that limerick! Very well done! I love it! 🙂
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Thank you, Mind and Life Matters! I’m glad you liked it!
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I loved the “gentle” sense of this poem.
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Thank you, Hélène Vaillant. Best wishes.
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