When I can’t get off my butt, there’s nothing like a kick to do the trick.
I’m beginning to value pain. To reinforce that value I think of it as the whispering of angels calling me to pay attention. Of course, I could just as well think of it as a kick in the butt, but this is supposed to be a poem, and there is more to reality than meets the eye.
This is also supposed to be about spring, but all I hear about is winter. So. More snow? Or is it time for winter to get off its butt and go?
PAST WINTRY PAIN
COMES SPRING-BOLD RAIN
WE START AGAIN
Linked to K’lee and Dale’s Cosmic Photo Challenge and to dVerse Haibun Monday. Merril is hosting with the theme of March Madness.


Beautiful, Frank!
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Thank you!
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This poem made me smile. From pain to late spring. Snow and butts. Odd but poetic combinations!
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I am glad you liked this. Thank you!
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I feel your pain! I am ready for spring and to walk along a nature trail once again!
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I love those nature trails. Thank you, Elizabeth!
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Nice juxtaposition, Frank
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Thank you, Dale!
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Frank, our winter doesn’t want to go. We don’t have snow but the rain remains. Hope your pain goes away in the soon coming spring!
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I look at the pain as a learning experience and when it takes a break even a blessing. Thank you, Miriam!
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Yes, Frank, when there’s nothing I can do about the pain, feeling miserable and complaining won’t do any good, It only makes things worse. I appreciate the way you see pain and count the blessings when you get a break!
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Excellent combo, Frank!
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Thank you, K’lee!
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Yes! Let’s kick winter in the butt!
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I agree! Thank you, V.J!
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This made me laugh–not about your pain, of course, but just the tone. Well done!
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My pain is more that Woody Allen metaphysical kind that deserves a good laugh. Thank you for the prompt, Merril!
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You’re welcome, Frank!
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The tone is very different to your usual zen. You sound to use a British expression, pissed off with winter. I love the poppies.
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I figured I’d give the zen a rest. I’m glad you noticed the poppies. They were from last May. Thank you, Jane!
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It does the soul good to shake it up a bit.
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I love any poem that uses the word butt twice. Also enjoyed your sarcasm, as you played with the words. Is your pain from arthritis like many of us?
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My pain is more that amorphous kind that I should just learn to enjoy and stop whining about. It really could be much worse. Thank you, Glenn!
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Frank you bring up a good point. For a society that is phobic about pain — take a pill! take a pill! — pain is, as you call it, “the whispering of angels… to pay attention.” I love the last line of your haiku, “we start again” which can refer to spring or to our footsteps after the pain.
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We do seem to have too many pills for too many pains. Thank you, Jade!
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Winter very much needs a good kick up the butt to get gone.
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Hopefully it gets the hint. Thank you, Carol!
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Pain in proportion lets us know we’re alive! I love the humor you bring to this one, Frank!
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Pain can be a blessing. Thank you, Frank!
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I’m ready to start over, Frank.
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Me, too. Thank you, Dan!
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Ahhh the pain in the joints. Lol. Your “haiku” rhymed.
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It was part of the March madness. Thank you, Toni!
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You did good Frank!
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I hear your woes Frank. You got more than your share of snow and freezing cold this winter.
Nicely done!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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The haiku is beautiful.
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Thank you, Reena!
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I like the humour of your haibun. Winter can really drag on some years.
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It can be difficult – but then comes spring. Thank you, Suzanne!
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This is pointed and excellent Frank, especially the haiku! Pain is the great reminder that, yes, we are still here. And no, we are not indestructable… as we thought when we were younger!
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Thank you, Rob!
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“and there is more to reality than meets the eye”: Very well said! I really liked the humour that you have incorporated in this haibun.
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Thank you, Anmol!
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When you put it like that, it worth suffering while you wait! 🙂 Lovely Haiku
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Suffering can be valuable. Thank you, Christine!
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Yes it can 🙂
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A kick in the butt is a call to attention. I know it feels and looks like winter here, and we are talking Spring!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Indeed… I feel much the same… winter is still holding on
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It is. Thank you, Bjorn!
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Love the photos and hope really winter gets off its butt so spring can truly arrive. Can’t wait for that spring and rain!
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It will arrive. Thank you, Grace!
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I want to lie down in the middle of that last photo, Frank!
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It is like a blanket of flowers. Thank you, Sara!
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Your haiku sums it up! (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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