Knightly habits sharply scheming,
Fighting boldly, mercy beaming,
Virtue, villains, birthing meaning,
Serving while awake or dreaming
Guard us through the dark of night.
When the evil one has ended
Wars turn peaceful, we’re befriended.
Springtime comes and it is splendid.
Guide us still by shining light.
Linked to dVerse Poetics. Amaya is hosting with the theme of ‘birth’. Also linked to dVerse Open Link Night where Lillian is hosting. The poem is an attempt to imitate the meter and rhyme pattern of Tennyson’s The Lady of Shalott.

I like this, Frank. The last line is clever.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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A very clever verse Frank.
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Thank you, Peter!
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your last line says so much and great pics Frank!
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Thank you, Kate!
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Love the sound in the whole piece Frank
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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I most especially enjoy the sounds when reading aloud!
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Thank you, Lillian!
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I think you must be talking about writing!
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It could be writing now that you mention it. Thank you, Amaya!
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Brilliant! ❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Lol. I get the rythm of Poe’s The Raven. Good write Frank.
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Thank you, Toni!
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This is wonderful Frank.
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Thank you, Linda!
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YES on every line. May the madness end and stillness in light reign.
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Thank you, Jade!
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YW!
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I think I got a hint of Christmas in the last lines.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You’ve definitely captured Tennyson’s meter and rhyme pattern, Frank; I’m also reminded of Poe. I agree with Lill about reading it aloud. I like the shift from the dark of night to the hopefulness of ‘Springtime comes and it is splendid’. Great word, splendid!
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I agree about the shift to hopefulness. We may have no use for war, but we certainly need our warriors to deliver us from it.
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Thank you, Ken!
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Thank you, Kim!
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a tender prayer sprinkled with lilting rhymes.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome, Frank!
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A beautiful rhythm throughout Frank and I love the last line especially!
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Thank you, Xenia!
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Very clever!
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Thank you!
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I love the Lady of Shallot. You did capture the rhythm of it.
I like the shift to hopefulness at the end.
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Thank you, Merril! I like to keep the poems hopeful. Who knows who may need it?
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I like the rhythm of this.
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Thank you, Ali!
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I don’t know about the meter rhyme but it was a certainly very nice read. Great flow. And thank you, I´ll have to study this type of form.
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Thank you!
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Beautifully penned.
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Thank you!
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Kudos for a piece appropo’ to more than one prompt. I did not break it down by foot and meter, but it is a divine ersatz Tennyson; nice job(s).
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A sign that I couldn’t think of anything else at the moment. Thank you, Glenn!
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Great write Frank!
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That you, Rob!
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Great rhythm … and with a punch!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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I like the thought of Springtime coming….seems so far away. I tried the same scheme.
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It will be here in a few months. Thank you, Mary!
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Need we guess who the evil one is?
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A lot of evil (and good) out there. Thank you, Judy!
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When the evil one has ended
Wars turn peaceful,
Interesting lines.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You’re right about that rhythm and rhyme structure. It’s obviously perfect for reading aloud, and for memorising.
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Rhythm and sound does help one remember. Thank you, Sarah!
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Wars turn peaceful, we are befriended … has such a dreamy layer to it.
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I am glad it has that dreamy layer. Thank you, Reena!
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Imitation: unlocked. Nice job!
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Thank you, Xan!
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This is like a ballad. Well done, you’ve caught the rhythm too. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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At Best Structure
Is Honesty Law That
BRings Forth TRusT iN LiGHT
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Thank you, Fred!
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Welcome to You
With Art And
Science
Bringing
Balance too..:)
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Wonderful rhythm in this, Frank. The style really came through.
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Thank you, Sara!
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