Salt and pepper turn to gray.
Water, wash me all away,
All but love that shines her light
For a journey through the night.
Suffering looks like defeat
Til submission is complete.
Salt and pepper, take this friend.
Guide gray fears beyond the end.
Linked to dVerse Quadrille hosted by Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk.com using the word “pepper”.
Photo: “Power of Love” by the author. This is graffiti I found under a train overpass in Chipilly Woods last weekend. I am linking it to K’lee and Dale’s Cosmic Photo Challenge. K’lee’s prompt is “Faster than the Speed of Light”. I hope they will accept it.
Excellent, we love a bit of free thinking and interpretation here on the Cosmic Photo Challenge, nice twist, thanks.
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Thanks, Dale! That photo prompt was a hard one, but I enjoyed it.
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It was, you’re right, K’lee’s a tough one for those. ;~}
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I read it several times and then when I saw the tags it presented a whole different meaning to me…!
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When I wrote it a few minutes ago, I thought I knew what it meant, but now who knows? On the surface there is someone with “salt and pepper” hair who is becoming more gray and is wondering about aging and death. Of course hair coloring can hide some of that. Thanks!
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I like this explanation.. I thought it was a friend that was passing on… read it again and it unravels beautifully.
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What a great graffiti statement, and it ties it all together perfectly.
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It was the best graffiti statement I have read in a long time and at the center or heart of this woodland trail. Thanks, Peter!
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An incantation! Magical, sir! Simply magical.
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I think it is an “incantation” now that you mention it. Thanks, Charley!
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Great poem, Frank. As for the graffiti — oh, if only we could have more power of love and less love of power!
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I was surprised to find that under the railway overpass in the middle of the woods. I’m glad you liked it, Beverly!
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I agree with Bev on the Graffiti, and can empathise with the salt and pepper in your poem.
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Thanks, Alison! Hair coloring resolves the superficial part of salt and pepper hair, but there’s more than the superficial. I’m glad you liked the graffiti. I was happy to find it since I immediately thought of K’lee an Dale’s photo challenge. Maybe there is something faster than light!
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I really like this one, Frank.
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I’m glad you liked it, Robbie!
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Excellent poem and photo, Frank! Many thanks for joining our challenge. Hope to see you again for the next one?
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I plan to keep entering your photo challenges if I can find something that works, and maybe even if I can’t. That was a rather hard challenge, but enjoyable. You do realize that something faster than light is not likely to photograph well. Thanks!
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Ah! Remember though, we leave the door wide open for your interpretation, however you want to express it. This way, there can be no wrong answer. Yes, you have a valid point. Something moving at the speed of light couldn’t be photographed in traditional ways. But slow it down for a second or two and you never know what you’ll see?🌞
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I liked your prompt. It was unusual and kept me thinking about it over the weekend. When I saw that graffiti I thought, “This just might work.” I hope you come up with more like it.
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Nice rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful poem!
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked the sound. I try to make these poems sound as smooth as possible. I figure if the content doesn’t work, the sound might. If the content does work, the sound just enhances it.
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You are so right. When they match, it’s just a delight for both our senses and our mind. Your poem always does it. No problem!
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this sounds like aging gracefully to me
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I was hoping it would represent aging gracefully. Thanks!
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Great take on pepper, Frank! I think salt and pepper hair is distinguished. I can’t wait for more of my silver flashed to come through!
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It does look nice. I’m glad you liked it, Kim!
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What incredible wisdom, Frank. Particularly in these lines:
“Water, wash me all away”
“Suffering looks like defeat
Til submission is complete.”
Now you and I both know, grey (and salt and pepper) is immensely sexy on men, like silver on women.
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It can look very nice. I am glad you liked it, Estella!
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Hey, Frank, post your photo over at my photography site; I dig it. Busy man, posting poems on more than one site, working it–course that’s what we photographers do all the time. Creativity springing forth like dewy dandelions
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Thanks for the reminder, Glenn. I just posted it there. I’m glad you liked it!
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Frank, that last stanza knocked it out of the ball park for me. The whole idea of resistance causing suffering…once we grasp that, life changes. Still working on it.
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I think you are right about resistance causing suffering. I am still working on it as well. Thanks, Victoria!
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A beautiful and uplifting message Frank ~ May the light always Guide gray fears beyond the end.
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Thank you, Grace! I hope it does as well.
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Each reading brings a new level of meaning – the mark of great poetry! Love the photo, too! (Although, I think you should ‘fess up, Frank – that was you with the spray paint the night before, wasn’t it? haha!)
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I was asking myself what it would take to make that graffiti. Whoever did this had more talent with spray paint than I have. Taking a photo is something I can manage. I’m glad you liked it!
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Nice take on the pepper prompt, Frank. And the graffiti is memorable too 🙂
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It is memorable. There is a lot of graffiti under that bridge. This is the only one of value. I’m glad you liked it, Jane!
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Most graffiti is pretty unoriginal. Glad you spotted what was worth saving 🙂
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I really like this and the rhyming.
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Thank you! I like the sound of rhyme and meter. I figure if the poem turns out to not make sense, maybe the sound of it will still be valuable.
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Acceptance of aging is something… and salt and pepper is so much better than going bald.
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That’s true. I do still have most of my hair. It could be worse. Thanks, Björn!
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I like the idea of salt and pepper guiding gray fears beyond the end! Inspired ❤️
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I hope there is something guiding it. I am glad you liked it, Sanaa!
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I like this unexpected take on the prompt, and the comforting take on aging.
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I figure there is no need to be uncomfortable about aging, although staying healthy is important and can be a worry for some. I’m glad you liked it, Sarah!
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Thanks Frank. That is a cleansing journey. We all need to be washed off from this crazy world. That helped me, thanks
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I am glad it helped, Walter. Thanks!
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Unique use of pepper, Frank. I love this!
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Thank you, Sara! I’m glad you liked it.
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I really liked this poem. The lines “Suffering looks like defeat
Til submission is complete.” struck me in particular and from my perspective was about not only acceptance of mortality but that death can be a relief from suffering.
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Yes, death can be a relief. Some people take that option too early when they should take the option of submission. Death comes eventually to all of us. I’m glad you liked the poem!
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Very nice quadrille.
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Thank you!
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Sounds like a prayer to ease a person into the next life. Very nice. 🙂
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It is sort of like that, or to not fear that when the time comes. Thanks!
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A powerful message painted and it makes me wonder about the artist. Salt and Pepper hair part of the cycle of life, but you can cover the signs with a box of magical color.
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The hair colors could also be wild like blue with red highlights although I won’t be trying that myself. I’ve wondered who the artist of the graffiti is as well. It is a message I would expect someone in this community would tolerate if not endorse.
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Widely open, yet full of meaning. A well woven riddle, this.
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Thank you! Riddles can be good. I am not sure what it means at the moment myself. I thought I knew earlier today when I wrote it.
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This holds so much wisdom… I especially like ‘Water, wash me all away, All but love that shines her light’.
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Thank you, Janice! I’m glad you liked it.
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Salt and pepper, take this friend.
Guide gray fears beyond the end.
Such depthness in your words, Frank.
And thank you for the review and for purchasing my book. I appreciate you. It means a lot.
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You’re welcome and thank you. I enjoyed your book. You put together an insightful collection of poems. Although many may have experiences like yours, you were able to express them in a way that resonates with readers.
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Thank you so much, Frank. I appreciate your review a lot. And it means a lot to me that you purchased my book. My pen has matured but the feelings there are raw. Thank you again!
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Love the image and the words. And I agree with everyone here, salt and peppery hair does indeed look very classy as opposed to dyeing it some absurd colour.
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I agree about salt and pepper hair. I definitely won’t dye it blue. I am glad you liked this!
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A lovely poem, Frank 🙂
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Thanks, Ronnie!
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Great piece! Could be read in a few different ways…and that graffiti image ads to the overall meaning.
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After seeing that graffiti on Saturday, I figured I had to use it whatever the dVerse or photo prompts were today. I am glad you liked it!
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I like the flash of emotion as the response to graffiti!
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Thanks, Kathy! The main prompt for me was the graffiti. I am glad you liked it.
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I had to read this a few times to get the meaning. It’s thought-provoking, which I like the challenge. Well done.
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I am glad you liked it. I try not to make things too cryptic, and I thought I knew what I was writing, but I didn’t understand this after I wrote it either. Thanks, Eugenia!
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Love this visual prompt and your response, Frank.
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Thanks, Sarah! When I saw that graffiti, I figured I would need to use it somehow this week.
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Gorgeous, gorgeous rhymes.
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I am glad you liked the sound of this. Thank you!
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layers of meaning here….each time I read it I come up with something different. Salt and pepper….grey hair does not a salt and peppered attitude make 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it, Lillian. I am glad this resonated with you enough that some meaning was experienced, and layers of meaning is even better. Thank you!
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Meter and rhyme are just right, and what a treat to hear you reading it!
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I am glad you liked the reading. It helps me check if what I wrote made sense by listening to it. Thank you!
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A sagacious regard of life in metre and rhymes … and being spot on at 44 words. Plus an intriguing graffiti. What a feast!
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Thanks, Colin! The 44 word constraint is a useful addition to the constraints of rhyme and meter. It forces even more revisions but hopefully the effort is worth it in the end.
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In your hand, every word is gold, Frank!
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Love how the graffiti message ties to the poem. Best bit of graffiti I’ve ever seen captured.
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It is my favorite graffiti as well. Now that I’ve seen what is possible with graffiti, I’ll be looking for more. Thanks, Lynn!
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The last line has much depth and a prayerful sentiment. As we turn salt and peppered, the beyond gets closer and hopefully one can resolve the fear inherent in getting older. Love shines the light.
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That’s it exactly. Love shines the light beyond the end. Thanks, Olga!
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A good message in both poem and graffiti.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked them both.
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Cute poem about love
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Thank you, Sabio!
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I love this, especially the salt an pepper repetition and the last line.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked the ending and the repetition.
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Salt and pepper, take this friend.
Guide gray fears beyond the end.
Sounds very close to a prayer Frank. It is good one relates to the al- Mighty as it will bring good tidings!
Hank
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It is like a prayer. I hadn’t thought of it like that before, but I think it makes sense. Thanks, Hank!
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A poem about aging and learning. Really makes you think.
I loved the graffiti!
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Thank you, Sreesha! I am glad you liked the graffiti and the thought behind the poem.
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AgE
LoVes NoW
GraceFuLLy GreY
iN STrenGth oF WiLL
oVeR
FrOwnS
oF StatuS
PowerS..:)
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I agree. Love is better than power. Thanks, Fred!
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Welcome
Frank..
Hope you
Enjoy the
Rest of
Your week..:)
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i love how well this flows…how quickly it reads. and so much emotion.
http://www.warningthestars.com
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Thank you, Stacy! I try to make the sound flow well in case the message doesn’t. I am glad you liked it.
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I have to read this several times. I like the turn you made in the last stanza. This may be about ageing and suffering, but what I love here is that the person who is ageing and suffering is, in the end, in control of the grey fears.
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Yes, the aging and suffering person is in control of these grey fears although it might not seem possible to control them and perhaps they can’t be controlled without help from the light that comes from love which is also beyond. Thanks, Imelda!
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Graffiti and resilience poetry go together like cheese and crackers. 😉 Lovely.
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Thank you! I like the comparison to cheese and crackers.
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